Perseverance
Never give up on something you belive in.74 total reviews
Comment from Norbanus
Powerful verse here, My Friend
Each line a story alone
Revealing beginning and end
Send us another sometime
Echoing smooth flowing tone
Verse with delightful fine rhyme
Everyone loves words that show
Relief from shackles that bind
And hope for retort that's so clear
No one will doubt what they'll find
Count out the tending to fear
Enjoy every line that we send
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Powerful verse here, My Friend
Each line a story alone
Revealing beginning and end
Send us another sometime
Echoing smooth flowing tone
Verse with delightful fine rhyme
Everyone loves words that show
Relief from shackles that bind
And hope for retort that's so clear
No one will doubt what they'll find
Count out the tending to fear
Enjoy every line that we send
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Staying true to yourself and your believes is ways a hard thing but you poem describes it very nicely. Your acrostic poem is very well written.
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Staying true to yourself and your believes is ways a hard thing but you poem describes it very nicely. Your acrostic poem is very well written.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from 9999pool
A great acrostic with a great message and a to do plan to get more out of our perseverance. Never give up and have a clear goal.
Do not rush into anything rashly but with patience and strength. Watch out for the pitfalls and continue to review and and improve.
We will surely get to our goals if we are persistent, determined and with a positive attitude.
So persevere without any fear of failures. Smiles.
Great write and best wishes to the contest.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
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A great acrostic with a great message and a to do plan to get more out of our perseverance. Never give up and have a clear goal.
Do not rush into anything rashly but with patience and strength. Watch out for the pitfalls and continue to review and and improve.
We will surely get to our goals if we are persistent, determined and with a positive attitude.
So persevere without any fear of failures. Smiles.
Great write and best wishes to the contest.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
Well said my friend. Perseverance isn't always easy but can pay off. Great acrostic form. Best wishes Dean in the contest.
Teresa
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Well said my friend. Perseverance isn't always easy but can pay off. Great acrostic form. Best wishes Dean in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Aplgwest
A poem that follows the acrostic poetry pattern without ever seeming forced to fit it. The messages, which are worthy ones, stay in control and flow well. Good luck in the contest.
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A poem that follows the acrostic poetry pattern without ever seeming forced to fit it. The messages, which are worthy ones, stay in control and flow well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
A great Acrostic poem, with great advice to all, Every line has a very positive suggestion. You have rhymed them which makes this acrostic a very good contender. If we were to affirm these each morning, we are half way to living a wholesome and balanced life.
Well done
Good luck in the contest. Mary
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A great Acrostic poem, with great advice to all, Every line has a very positive suggestion. You have rhymed them which makes this acrostic a very good contender. If we were to affirm these each morning, we are half way to living a wholesome and balanced life.
Well done
Good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Dean - loved this one, wisdom for the ages I think. A solid acrostic poem, with clear message and great word choices to open up the truth within ourselves and our choices.
Overall excellent submission - and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Dear Dean - loved this one, wisdom for the ages I think. A solid acrostic poem, with clear message and great word choices to open up the truth within ourselves and our choices.
Overall excellent submission - and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Dean,
Well, this one did it for me! You present a great message of hopeful perseverance in this splendid write. I appreciated the strength of will you project through the delivery. I also, liked the rhyme designed into the piece. Wonderful thought and presentation...good luck with your entry, my friend, Bill
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Hello Dean,
Well, this one did it for me! You present a great message of hopeful perseverance in this splendid write. I appreciated the strength of will you project through the delivery. I also, liked the rhyme designed into the piece. Wonderful thought and presentation...good luck with your entry, my friend, Bill
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another exceptional piece of writing that the author has created with this post. I totally agree with what the author is writing here. We have to remain true to our true selves and trust in God. Jeep going and persevering and we will get there in the end.
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This is yet another exceptional piece of writing that the author has created with this post. I totally agree with what the author is writing here. We have to remain true to our true selves and trust in God. Jeep going and persevering and we will get there in the end.
Comment Written 25-May-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I agree with you entirely, but the problem is that nowadays there seem to be a shortage of people who have integrity and stamina or the willpower to persevere. I was brought up this way and it is only through my determination, willpower and breeding that I am the strong person that I am, I may not be rich, but have spirit. Your words convey an important message for all, and I liked the fact that your acrostic also rhymed-great. Most enjoyable and well written. Good luck in the contest, Faye
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I agree with you entirely, but the problem is that nowadays there seem to be a shortage of people who have integrity and stamina or the willpower to persevere. I was brought up this way and it is only through my determination, willpower and breeding that I am the strong person that I am, I may not be rich, but have spirit. Your words convey an important message for all, and I liked the fact that your acrostic also rhymed-great. Most enjoyable and well written. Good luck in the contest, Faye
Comment Written 25-May-2014
