Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

Cute poem. I wonder how well she knew his other brothers. If my instincts are right, this isn't a monogamous relationship. Of course I could have misinterpreted the poem as I often do. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

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reply by the author on 20-May-2014

Thank you, Linda, for the excellent review.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Very fun poem. It put a smile on my face. I love how you wrote this. I wonder if a simple rhyme would help the flow and make it even more fun? But great job. Very nice.

 Comment Written 19-May-2014

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reply by the author on 20-May-2014

Thank you, Michael, for the excellent review.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Bill, I found this story to be quite interesting and it away I found it humorous and quite funny. It had good context and the meaning was quite stimulating because of its humorous attitude that it was expressed by. The rhyming was a little acute and somewhat forced but it works for this humorous poem. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and I hope they get a chance to read it also.
Alex

 Comment Written 19-May-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

Thank you, Alex, for the excellent review. This is just a quick write to keep my funny side alive.

reply by krys123 on 19-May-2014

Bill, And a very funny side you have Bill And you are so sincerely welcome.