Beaks
Is what the kid said true?4 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
A taut suspense horror story that put me through an emotional roller coaster. I was expecting one ending and you surprised me with something else. The ending was tender and tragic at the same time ,and will stick in my head for quite a while.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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A taut suspense horror story that put me through an emotional roller coaster. I was expecting one ending and you surprised me with something else. The ending was tender and tragic at the same time ,and will stick in my head for quite a while.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from aanneee
Not my cuppa tea at all but I couldn't drag myself away from it. You had me captured from first to last word, I am an old gal who likes light and breezy and happy endings. I knew there was a reason I was scared of swimming pools and such and I will sleep with a night-light on tonight. Thanks for the read - I think - Dinah
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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Not my cuppa tea at all but I couldn't drag myself away from it. You had me captured from first to last word, I am an old gal who likes light and breezy and happy endings. I knew there was a reason I was scared of swimming pools and such and I will sleep with a night-light on tonight. Thanks for the read - I think - Dinah
Comment Written 06-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the review. I'm really glad you liked it. Take care and sleep well.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good clear dialogue that reveal the emotions of the characters. More emotion from officer Harvey as Sergeant Baker said she believed the boy. Good transition between events. Nice, steady pace leading to a conclusion filled with smiles.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Good clear dialogue that reveal the emotions of the characters. More emotion from officer Harvey as Sergeant Baker said she believed the boy. Good transition between events. Nice, steady pace leading to a conclusion filled with smiles.
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you for the fine review.
Comment from dmt1967
'The boy skipped swimming lessons and got caught, (simple as') I would write 'it's as simple as that'
'Maybe this is just his of() dealing with it, maybe this Elliott, who took him there is the monster." Insert (way)
great story good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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'The boy skipped swimming lessons and got caught, (simple as') I would write 'it's as simple as that'
'Maybe this is just his of() dealing with it, maybe this Elliott, who took him there is the monster." Insert (way)
great story good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thanks for the review and the six. I'm glad you liked it.
