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The Porcupine's Lament

5-7-5 Animal Poem

7 total reviews 
Comment from Smoothiecool
Excellent
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good luck in the contest

you have complied to the rules

your few words allow the reader to see and feel that its touch on the love side of thinks with quills instead of fur
ooch

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 19-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review. Cheers.
reply by Smoothiecool on 22-May-2014
    welcome..SC
Comment from rouskin
Excellent
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Life is really rough When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough! Looks like a winner to me and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 19-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review...and the vote!
Comment from a.w.brooks
Excellent
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Really loved this one I like the rhyming on the poem loved it Life is really rough
When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough!

 Comment Written 18-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review.
Comment from RYME4U
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Cute message . Cute picture. I got the "POINT" of this one right away. This had the animal and the witty humor. Good job
on this contest entry

 Comment Written 18-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review.
Comment from DragonSkulls
Excellent
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I want to thank you for jumping in my high dollar contest and adhering to the rules. I wish you the best of luck in the voting booth. Love the pic.

DS

 Comment Written 18-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars, the review and the good wishes.
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent
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Adorable illustration for your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like your strong rhymes and the humor they add to the poem
I can well imagine how unappealing quills can make the whole love-making process LOL
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 18-May-2014


reply by the author on 21-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you liked the illustration. It was a lucky find.
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This one definitely raises a chuckle and indeed a dilemma for the poor porcupine LOL with his quills 'instead of fluff' - and a great pic

 Comment Written 18-May-2014


reply by the author on 18-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you got a chuckle from it!
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
    Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you got a chuckle from it!