The Porcupine's Lament
5-7-5 Animal Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
you have complied to the rules
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that its touch on the love side of thinks with quills instead of fur
ooch
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
good luck in the contest
you have complied to the rules
your few words allow the reader to see and feel that its touch on the love side of thinks with quills instead of fur
ooch
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review. Cheers.
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welcome..SC
Comment from rouskin
Life is really rough When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough! Looks like a winner to me and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
Life is really rough When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough! Looks like a winner to me and I'm going to vote for you Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review...and the vote!
Comment from a.w.brooks
Really loved this one I like the rhyming on the poem loved it Life is really rough
When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough!
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
Really loved this one I like the rhyming on the poem loved it Life is really rough
When you've quills instead of fluff
Making love is tough!
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review.
Comment from RYME4U
Cute message . Cute picture. I got the "POINT" of this one right away. This had the animal and the witty humor. Good job
on this contest entry
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
Cute message . Cute picture. I got the "POINT" of this one right away. This had the animal and the witty humor. Good job
on this contest entry
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review.
Comment from DragonSkulls
I want to thank you for jumping in my high dollar contest and adhering to the rules. I wish you the best of luck in the voting booth. Love the pic.
DS
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
I want to thank you for jumping in my high dollar contest and adhering to the rules. I wish you the best of luck in the voting booth. Love the pic.
DS
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars, the review and the good wishes.
Comment from adewpearl
Adorable illustration for your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like your strong rhymes and the humor they add to the poem
I can well imagine how unappealing quills can make the whole love-making process LOL
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
Adorable illustration for your poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like your strong rhymes and the humor they add to the poem
I can well imagine how unappealing quills can make the whole love-making process LOL
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 21-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you liked the illustration. It was a lucky find.
Comment from zanya
This one definitely raises a chuckle and indeed a dilemma for the poor porcupine LOL with his quills 'instead of fluff' - and a great pic
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
This one definitely raises a chuckle and indeed a dilemma for the poor porcupine LOL with his quills 'instead of fluff' - and a great pic
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you got a chuckle from it!
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Thanks for the stars and the review. Glad you got a chuckle from it!