Geoff's Book Of Poultry
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Contemplation"My Book Of Funny Poems and Stories.
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Comment from sunao
This poem is captivating! Thank you so much for expressing yourself like this. The image is interesting too. I am glad that you got those two accolades. Please keep up with the good work and have a fantastic day!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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This poem is captivating! Thank you so much for expressing yourself like this. The image is interesting too. I am glad that you got those two accolades. Please keep up with the good work and have a fantastic day!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Sis. A bit rude I know but a lot of truth in this one. I am glad if you can see the picture it isn't showing up all the time.
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Your welcome!
Comment from Thal1959
I love the way your are going after life's difficulties with a sense of humor, Geoff. Remember - the family that stoops together, poops together!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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I love the way your are going after life's difficulties with a sense of humor, Geoff. Remember - the family that stoops together, poops together!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks mate. Our old cleaning lady says we men ought to sit when we pee like the women...less misses, hehe.
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Well, you know the old adage - "If you aim to please, please aim."
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I don't know whether I really want to know this. We all get older and get one or the other problem. Not that I have any yet. But at least you're not shy of sharing it in a poem. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Hi there, I don't know whether I really want to know this. We all get older and get one or the other problem. Not that I have any yet. But at least you're not shy of sharing it in a poem. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
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Thanks Ulla this was the very last most real life Potty Poem. I hope you heard the music I wrote for it as well. See you later.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Funny you call it the throne. lol. I dated a kid in high school and he told us about his throne. He said that whenever something was really bothering him he'd go sit on his throne for hours. We then asked what his throne was and he said the toilet. He said he'd just go sit on the toilet for an hour or two and he'd come out and he wouldn't be as stressed. That was his place he'd go to destress and think. We were all dumbfounded. It's one thing to spend a lot of time in the bathroom because you have reasons but to purposely sit on the toilet for hours doing nothing...Yeah, we didn't last....Not because of that, other reasons. lol. I liked your poem though. It was fun
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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Funny you call it the throne. lol. I dated a kid in high school and he told us about his throne. He said that whenever something was really bothering him he'd go sit on his throne for hours. We then asked what his throne was and he said the toilet. He said he'd just go sit on the toilet for an hour or two and he'd come out and he wouldn't be as stressed. That was his place he'd go to destress and think. We were all dumbfounded. It's one thing to spend a lot of time in the bathroom because you have reasons but to purposely sit on the toilet for hours doing nothing...Yeah, we didn't last....Not because of that, other reasons. lol. I liked your poem though. It was fun
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2017
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My brother had a library in the loo at one time. Goodness knows what the books smelled like after a while! Hope you heard the tune I wrote for it. planning to try and add some harmony if it does not make the file too big for FS.
Comment from Cmelton
This is a very interesting poem. I think most of us enjoy a moment or two extra on the toilet. But you have chosen great words and have made a nice rhyming scheme with your poem. I like your little message as well. I hope all is better with your health and wish you the best.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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This is a very interesting poem. I think most of us enjoy a moment or two extra on the toilet. But you have chosen great words and have made a nice rhyming scheme with your poem. I like your little message as well. I hope all is better with your health and wish you the best.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi new friend I hope you heard the music. It was a Midi file I converted to MP3, Hoping to add some harmony if the file is not too big for FS
Comment from Caressa_08
Your poetry has gone to another level, and well, I guess par for the age of what a lot of us have to deal with, as was told & sis the same diagnosis...Hope you and wife are doing alright , and what is the season now in the parts of Australia?...My hubby thinks you are heading into soon to be Fall, this month...Do hope to look at some other of your back posts later today.
Take care you and wifey, really like the piano music, is that you playing? Very appropriate, for this type of poem....Caressa_08
PS Need to ask, mate... how you put that on your post here, the music that is...not too technical with that or the videos others have on their poems, and too, their page...would appreciate the how to about this when you are able to possibly sent a message about how it's done.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Your poetry has gone to another level, and well, I guess par for the age of what a lot of us have to deal with, as was told & sis the same diagnosis...Hope you and wife are doing alright , and what is the season now in the parts of Australia?...My hubby thinks you are heading into soon to be Fall, this month...Do hope to look at some other of your back posts later today.
Take care you and wifey, really like the piano music, is that you playing? Very appropriate, for this type of poem....Caressa_08
PS Need to ask, mate... how you put that on your post here, the music that is...not too technical with that or the videos others have on their poems, and too, their page...would appreciate the how to about this when you are able to possibly sent a message about how it's done.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi Sis, thanks for the great review. I don't have a lot of time this morning as I need to get to Hospital to visit Louise. If you are on Face book with me you will see some of our dramas there. I recently converted the music file to MP3 from a Midi file as MP3 sound is more superior. I wrote the music on Encore programme so it is me playing but I can't hear ordinary piano and stuff now so done on Puter. Glad you heard it ok I feel like I would like to add harmony but not sure if that would make the file too big for FS. have a look in your editing for Advanced Options down lower on the page. You can add background music with the BGsound command I think. DeanKuch might be able to help. Pray for Louise at Hospital; ok!
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Oh, Hope Louise is improving, and gets to come home soon...Thanks for letting me know, and God Bless you Both.
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Thanks for the info, and Prayers across the miles for Louise.
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Thanks for the prayers a bit of a long haul yet. Lord Bless.
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We have just gone into Winter here as at the first of June.
Comment from AnnieDawn
You have a devastating illness. It is very difficult to go anywhere isn't it. My father suffered from the same illness so I have an idea of the problems you have faced. I get a kick out of the way you "kick" it. The picture is awesome by the way. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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You have a devastating illness. It is very difficult to go anywhere isn't it. My father suffered from the same illness so I have an idea of the problems you have faced. I get a kick out of the way you "kick" it. The picture is awesome by the way. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Thanks Sis for the lovely review. Some times I have to wear those incontinence pants. The other day it was real close I had already "been" and I was having breakfast and whoops...leave it to you what nearly happened. It has been better since we now both have our own loos. It was a bit of a race in the old days when we shared just one.Hope you heard the music. It was only a Midi file originally and I recently converted it to MP3 might add some harmony if it is not to big for FS. Last Potty poem hehe.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous loo poem. When we have everything we need we can stay on the throne the whole day long. I an usually in a bug hurry to continue with my work.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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A very well-written humorous loo poem. When we have everything we need we can stay on the throne the whole day long. I an usually in a bug hurry to continue with my work.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Thanks Sis much appreciated, I hope you liked the tune. May try to add melody if it doesn't make the file too big for FS. Cheers😃
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
It's not funny but it is and with Crones, i fully understand the urgency of having one handy. Cute piece and even cuter notes. Thank you for another laugh of the day.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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It's not funny but it is and with Crones, i fully understand the urgency of having one handy. Cute piece and even cuter notes. Thank you for another laugh of the day.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017
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Hi Barb I know a few with crones. Hope you heard the tune.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Come on, Sankey, get out of the bathroom. Someone else needs o go. Another funny poem, but I hope you run out soon. Every time I read on of these I have the urge to go.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Come on, Sankey, get out of the bathroom. Someone else needs o go. Another funny poem, but I hope you run out soon. Every time I read on of these I have the urge to go.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2017
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Hah can have that affect on ya. This was the last potty poem. Might try a harmony if it does not make the file too big for FS. Thanks.
