Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The phantom at the feast"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
4 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Okay, I'm WAY behind in this story. But it's worth catching up. Loved the word, "gurning/gurned". Never heard that before. Seems it's unique to the British. I love the way Ess handles Oz. He's a supreme pain in the arse, but very fun to read about. Great chapter!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Okay, I'm WAY behind in this story. But it's worth catching up. Loved the word, "gurning/gurned". Never heard that before. Seems it's unique to the British. I love the way Ess handles Oz. He's a supreme pain in the arse, but very fun to read about. Great chapter!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you. That's the odd thing about Oz. Women seem to like him, both in the book and in the readership, though he is the antithesis of what modern men should be
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Maybe women (sometimes) like a project. :D
Comment from Adri7enne
Sent me looking for definitions for 'gurned' and found pictures. LOL! Then, when I finished, there was the definition in your notes. Pest! LOL!
Poor Ess. I could feel her discomfort. Back to normal - back with Oz. Waiting for the next one.
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Sent me looking for definitions for 'gurned' and found pictures. LOL! Then, when I finished, there was the definition in your notes. Pest! LOL!
Poor Ess. I could feel her discomfort. Back to normal - back with Oz. Waiting for the next one.
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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So I'm damned if I give a definition and I'm damned if I don't? You're a hard woman. Thanks for the review
Comment from Uniqusatya
Hey thats is a mystery story i understand.i could follow your background and is a well expressed story.But the narration is dissapointing from reader view.Without narration it would be more like a script but the charecters dialogue could not be followed.
Happy writing and good luck
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Hey thats is a mystery story i understand.i could follow your background and is a well expressed story.But the narration is dissapointing from reader view.Without narration it would be more like a script but the charecters dialogue could not be followed.
Happy writing and good luck
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thanks for the review. There wasn't a lot of action in this particular section for me to narrate, so I accept it's heavy on dialogue, but it is just a small section of the book.
Comment from Briar172
Okay, I learned a thing, maybe two. Love it when I learn, get's the juices going. Great Good Stuff! You Publish yet? Hmmm. Chapter 14. I better go read from beginning ... So much on me plate, I've but one fork. Stab or scoop?
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Okay, I learned a thing, maybe two. Love it when I learn, get's the juices going. Great Good Stuff! You Publish yet? Hmmm. Chapter 14. I better go read from beginning ... So much on me plate, I've but one fork. Stab or scoop?
Comment Written 14-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Published? From your lips to a publisher's ear. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
