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Comment from Permelia
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If fanstorians keep writing acrostics, I maybe forced to write one or attempt to also- but so far, my brain just is not inspired to write poetry-it seems to come and go when I feel the need to write poetry- now I seem to be consumed with getting the stories of my life written.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2005

Comment from bayley
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Total respect for a fine acrostic that flows beautifully and holds a wonderful message. I wish I could write them like this ~Sean

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2005

Comment from Bryana
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Beautiful! So inspirational my friend!
I'm glad I'm back reading your work,
It inspires me as well.

He tenido problemas mi amiga por eso no te he leido.
Un abrazo,
Ana

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2005

Comment from tamsteambash
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my Acrostic review great poem


Giving inspirational words
Reaching emotions
Eager to be read
A fun play on words
There are no errors

Pushing limits rhythmic play
On a journey
Enjoyed the read
Must say farewell

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from AuroraSky
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Self challenge has been done really well. It is unusual to see you write an acrostic poem!

Inspriration is such a word of inspiration that I am amazed at the effects rippling across fanstory with it.

Very intriguing.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from mfwilkie
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I nspiration is love
N urtured within our soul,
S ublime imagination,
P assion for life,
I nner strength
R eflected in our actions,
A rt flowing in feverish joy
T antalizing our senses,
I ndividuality creating
O riginality, flows freely...
N ever-ending enthusiasm.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from Focused True North
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This is a lovely work in all ways. It's a joy to read through it and relate in personal ways as the listing continues down to the end of the acrostic. Thanks for posting it, Pili. The poem is terrific.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from spazmasterr
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What a great piece. I do these every once in a blue moon, but they always feel so forced.

This one really works and is just great.

What can I say that you don't already know?


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from Aleksandramarie
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shoot, I posted an achrostic early, early this morning like 2 am, ct, Inspiration, and then a prose piece this afternoon on Inspiration.

I guess great minds think alike. LOL

this is lovely and I wish that I had the patience to look through the artwork, but I just do not have the patience right now,

Lovely this is and thank you for all your inspiration. mspotter

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2005

Comment from clhutchinson
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Wonderful selection of definitions for this word. This acrostic expresses well with clear thoughts and great relativity. It is inspiring in its own messages.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2005