Short Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "This Time"A Collection Of Short Form Poetry
18 total reviews
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Looks awesome! Romancing the stone. Romantic, move over Bethoven's moon Sonata. This is a winner!!!I like the azure, matching the water. Got to run, son of a gun!
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Looks awesome! Romancing the stone. Romantic, move over Bethoven's moon Sonata. This is a winner!!!I like the azure, matching the water. Got to run, son of a gun!
Comment Written 12-May-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
god luck in the contest
your syllable count in your lines count down correct
your words allow the reader to see and feel that the love you have is not built on the lies heard they just need to look into your heart
cheers Smmothiecool
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god luck in the contest
your syllable count in your lines count down correct
your words allow the reader to see and feel that the love you have is not built on the lies heard they just need to look into your heart
cheers Smmothiecool
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from rjuselius
losing your trust in the opposite sex can be a daunting event. just hop on the next train someone might say, but i don't think that is proactive.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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losing your trust in the opposite sex can be a daunting event. just hop on the next train someone might say, but i don't think that is proactive.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from seaglass
This poem worked out well in nonet form. It flows nicely and depicts a person hungry to be accepted, loved, and validated.The breaks between some of the lines is effective.
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This poem worked out well in nonet form. It flows nicely and depicts a person hungry to be accepted, loved, and validated.The breaks between some of the lines is effective.
Comment Written 11-May-2014
Comment from Dom G Robles
This is a very elegant poem, its structure, shape and the coloring background and with the two lovers kissing each other. The expressions of love that is evoked is great. It is with confidence and sincerity. It is simple with no rhyme but has accomplished its theme. Dom
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This is a very elegant poem, its structure, shape and the coloring background and with the two lovers kissing each other. The expressions of love that is evoked is great. It is with confidence and sincerity. It is simple with no rhyme but has accomplished its theme. Dom
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from evilynne
This is very romantic and very effective with the picture and black background. It seems to follow the required poetic form correctly. Good luck!
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This is very romantic and very effective with the picture and black background. It seems to follow the required poetic form correctly. Good luck!
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yeah, it flows okay, Michael. Trying to console a woman whose been burned more than once isn't an easy task, is it? They are so weary of opening up, letting someone in, but who can blame them, really?
Good luck to you...
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Yeah, it flows okay, Michael. Trying to console a woman whose been burned more than once isn't an easy task, is it? They are so weary of opening up, letting someone in, but who can blame them, really?
Good luck to you...
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
I think its beautiful you could say that to me anytime. Sometimes format doesn't fit, its the heart that has the stature no need to rhyme when the rhymes says it all. Good luck with your entry. Terrie
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I think its beautiful you could say that to me anytime. Sometimes format doesn't fit, its the heart that has the stature no need to rhyme when the rhymes says it all. Good luck with your entry. Terrie
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is beautifully presented and it is a fine example of the nonet poem. The words and incidental rhyming make it a pleasure to read. My best wishes for the competition.
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This is beautifully presented and it is a fine example of the nonet poem. The words and incidental rhyming make it a pleasure to read. My best wishes for the competition.
Comment Written 10-May-2014
Comment from Njorgensen
Sometimes what we set out to write turns out to be something else. This is a fine example of a nonet. I like your subject and the way this poem flows. Nice job.
Njorgensen
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Sometimes what we set out to write turns out to be something else. This is a fine example of a nonet. I like your subject and the way this poem flows. Nice job.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 10-May-2014
