Comment from LIJ Red

Good

I see the first 5/7/5 in the first 17 syllables, but I am having trouble with the second. Like the TV ad-"Uh li'l hep here?" A 5/7/5 and a quatrain? Shame such a bright cheerful work gets only four stars,but...duh...

 Comment Written 09-May-2014

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reply by the author on 15-May-2014

thanks

Comment from TAB_that's me

Poor

This is not a 5-7-5 poem. It needs to have 3 lines with the specific number of syllables per line. Please read contest rules..................

 Comment Written 09-May-2014

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reply by the author on 09-May-2014

thank you for telling me that God bless you