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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
great message to not whinge about the end result if you haven't bothered to participate... and then I could I read it another way, but it had to do with erectile dysfunction and why we are turned off from voting for anyone... the lack of appeal that leaves us cold to the notion... either way, I hope your vote counts and the right people gain the power... we are in need of true leadership.
With our thoughts we create,
a privilege,
James xx
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Hi Debbie,
great message to not whinge about the end result if you haven't bothered to participate... and then I could I read it another way, but it had to do with erectile dysfunction and why we are turned off from voting for anyone... the lack of appeal that leaves us cold to the notion... either way, I hope your vote counts and the right people gain the power... we are in need of true leadership.
With our thoughts we create,
a privilege,
James xx
Comment Written 09-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Hi James, dear friend. I thought about the erectile dysfunction as I wrote this, since we are constantly bombarded with such commercials. Our politicians are always involed in affairs and sex scandals, so I don't think they have that particular problem. Good to hear from you. I hope and pray you are feeling better. Debbie xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I don't understand why we have such low turnouts on voting days. It's really sad. The elections effect all of us. You have written a very wonderful poem on a very important subject.
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I don't understand why we have such low turnouts on voting days. It's really sad. The elections effect all of us. You have written a very wonderful poem on a very important subject.
Comment Written 09-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Njorgensen
Terrific! Election dysfunction.
Voting is critical. Many who don't seem to be the ones who complain the loudest. In what direction this country heads is directly attributed to the voting process, no matter to what degree.
Njorgensen
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Terrific! Election dysfunction.
Voting is critical. Many who don't seem to be the ones who complain the loudest. In what direction this country heads is directly attributed to the voting process, no matter to what degree.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Terrie DeGolier
You are so right. It seems those that don't vote always complain the most. But sad to say the voters really don't have a voice anymore. The politicians seem to be out for them selves, the benefits, the raises. Its sad. Happy Mother's Debbie Terrie
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You are so right. It seems those that don't vote always complain the most. But sad to say the voters really don't have a voice anymore. The politicians seem to be out for them selves, the benefits, the raises. Its sad. Happy Mother's Debbie Terrie
Comment Written 08-May-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from JW
Hmm. Nice senyru.
However, it does not apply to me.
I voted yesterday.
In regards to having Republicans rule everything - it's happened in my state and, things have definitely changed --- for the worse. JW
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Hmm. Nice senyru.
However, it does not apply to me.
I voted yesterday.
In regards to having Republicans rule everything - it's happened in my state and, things have definitely changed --- for the worse. JW
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Good for you. I am glad you voted. More people need to pay attention to what the candidates really stand for and vote accordingly. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, this 5-7-5 has perfect syllable and line count and has the ironic and truthful conclusion that speaks so loudly to those in our country who do not vote. Well done. I had to go to your profile page to access this write. I do not know why I did not get in in my messages. :0 GracieAnn
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Debbie, this 5-7-5 has perfect syllable and line count and has the ironic and truthful conclusion that speaks so loudly to those in our country who do not vote. Well done. I had to go to your profile page to access this write. I do not know why I did not get in in my messages. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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I think I was too slow at adding the certificate, so after 2 reviews, it expired. Glad you found it. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Deborah Marie
Your message is loud and clear! It is well put especially with your last line; 'election dysfunction' Clever use of wording. Nice progression, rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing, Deb
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Your message is loud and clear! It is well put especially with your last line; 'election dysfunction' Clever use of wording. Nice progression, rhythm and flow. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
failure to vote
yet complains about results
'election dysfunction' << Excellent name for it!
You make a very good point here! I have found a LOT of people who love to complain and then say their votes don't count so why bother? Or some are just too lazy to go vote, thinking lots of others feel the same dissatisfaction and will vote for them. So there are never enough voters. It should be at least 90% all the time, but we're lucky to get half to vote.
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failure to vote
yet complains about results
'election dysfunction' << Excellent name for it!
You make a very good point here! I have found a LOT of people who love to complain and then say their votes don't count so why bother? Or some are just too lazy to go vote, thinking lots of others feel the same dissatisfaction and will vote for them. So there are never enough voters. It should be at least 90% all the time, but we're lucky to get half to vote.
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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More people need to pay attention to what the candidates really stand for and vote accordingly. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from krys123
Well Debbie, you got right to the point and collected all your senses and delivered an excellent piece of poetry or senryu.
Re: actually I enjoyed your complimentary authors notes and your poem that was very inventive and creative and showed your resourcefulness. It's also good to be pertaining to the voting of prompts and contest voting. Especially when it comes to being tied. Thank you so much for sharing this with others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
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Well Debbie, you got right to the point and collected all your senses and delivered an excellent piece of poetry or senryu.
Re: actually I enjoyed your complimentary authors notes and your poem that was very inventive and creative and showed your resourcefulness. It's also good to be pertaining to the voting of prompts and contest voting. Especially when it comes to being tied. Thank you so much for sharing this with others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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More people need to pay attention to what the candidates really stand for and vote accordingly. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
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And they must read the other contenders works to truly give all of them a chance.
Alex
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Yes, it is voting season again. And you are right , it is a time when we can make a change , but , only if we get out of our houses and cast our ballot. Well done Senyru. :-) Carolyn
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Yes, it is voting season again. And you are right , it is a time when we can make a change , but , only if we get out of our houses and cast our ballot. Well done Senyru. :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 08-May-2014
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More people need to pay attention to what the candidates really stand for and vote accordingly. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
