Sexual Re-awakening
a little soft porn17 total reviews
Comment from granny goes viral
Oh my goodness. You have just shown me how to write soft core and not jokes about it. Hadn't started writing in May. I am looking at some of your titles, I know I have read and rated (well) some. I see we share some (many) subjects of interest. I am looking forward to finding you memories, but I keep getting side tracked. Wow. A six stars on Sunday.
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Oh my goodness. You have just shown me how to write soft core and not jokes about it. Hadn't started writing in May. I am looking at some of your titles, I know I have read and rated (well) some. I see we share some (many) subjects of interest. I am looking forward to finding you memories, but I keep getting side tracked. Wow. A six stars on Sunday.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from cupa tea
I always enjoy your stories. This one was once again well written and kept my attention. Flowed well and was easy to read and understand...good luck!
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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I always enjoy your stories. This one was once again well written and kept my attention. Flowed well and was easy to read and understand...good luck!
Comment Written 11-May-2014
reply by the author on 11-May-2014
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Thanks so much. Always good to hear from you--but haven't seen you in a while.
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I've been really busy with real time. But I do come to the site and read and vote...I'll post in the future...when I have time...
Comment from dreamin'
Wow! I haven't read any other entries, but I'm not sure anything can top this. Tastefully written stories of this nature is a talent that not many have. Using a sex therapist as a means to tell it was smart. It provides a good setting, and a valid reason for the sexual activity (as opposed to a couple of people just going at it)
There was humor, and a playfulness that made getting turned on fun.
I think a lot of people would love to get the number for that therapist!
Good luck with the contest. I was going to enter, but I now I'm not so sure. :)
Debbie
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Wow! I haven't read any other entries, but I'm not sure anything can top this. Tastefully written stories of this nature is a talent that not many have. Using a sex therapist as a means to tell it was smart. It provides a good setting, and a valid reason for the sexual activity (as opposed to a couple of people just going at it)
There was humor, and a playfulness that made getting turned on fun.
I think a lot of people would love to get the number for that therapist!
Good luck with the contest. I was going to enter, but I now I'm not so sure. :)
Debbie
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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You might as well give erotica a shot inside this contest. This way you face no critique for addressing the subject. Try posting this on your own and you'll get more than a fe eyebrows raised.
This was really written as courtesy to the host who invited me to participate, but I doubt you'll see much more in this style by me. Still, I wasn't terribly ashamed of human sexuality and found it an interesting challenge.
I do thank you for the kind word and the galaxy of stars. I wanted to make sure there was a story line, not just porn.
Here's a story line and a twist on an old subject if yo decide to try this out. With my blessing, this was my second choice...a male gigalo, of for lack of a better word a make whore, but this man had a deep sensitivity for the ugly, the unwanted and spurned. He services both sexes and the way I saw it coming down, his crippled make client falls in love with a disfigure woman client and they live happily ever after.
Take it with my complete permission of it appeals to you. Thanks again.
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That is a love story through and through. An adult version of beauty and the beast, if you will. I think you should write it. Mine's about two lesbians in Paris. I'll have to think about posting it. But you are right, at least via contest it's more acceptable. Thanks
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Men absolutely love stories about lesbians.
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Ain't that the truth! :)
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Great response to the contest. I had to double-check that this was fiction. The scenario sounds very realistic. I like the couples respect and love for one another. Having sex in front of a camera would be a bit daunting! Very well written!
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Great response to the contest. I had to double-check that this was fiction. The scenario sounds very realistic. I like the couples respect and love for one another. Having sex in front of a camera would be a bit daunting! Very well written!
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Thanks so much. You must surely know that all fiction springs from something the writer has experiences--a time, a place or an emotion, but I won't tell you what part is true.
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No need to reveal the true parts. Although I am a bit curious about Wayne's "beautiful penis!" :D
Comment from comanalbert
Well, I knew you could do it; grocery shopping and bath taking have got a new meaning. Yet you have touched a very sensitive issue for most long time married couples and transformed it into a new sensation- redescovering love through sex...I don't know about the method with audience method but your story does the trick...
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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Well, I knew you could do it; grocery shopping and bath taking have got a new meaning. Yet you have touched a very sensitive issue for most long time married couples and transformed it into a new sensation- redescovering love through sex...I don't know about the method with audience method but your story does the trick...
Comment Written 06-May-2014
reply by the author on 06-May-2014
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It's very hard for me to write anything without a story line. some writers are almost lyrical in their descriptions of scenes and characters but are weak on plot. the same hold true for many writers of erotica. They concentrate on the sexual aspects and expect sex scenes to carry the story or film. Lots make money on it so who am I to say.
Though I don't usually wander into this territory, I wrote this due entirely to your invitation and to support your contest and six month anniversary. Doubt I'll do this again too soon.
Funny, a lot of my readers were uncomfortable with this form of writing while I was not. A good writer should explore new genres, though I still can't and don't feel at all challenged to write poetry. So don't ask. I'm old enough to say 'NO' and mean it.
Hope you're enjoying your membership here and that you continue to grow and develop friendships at FS.
Thank you very much for the bouquet of stars. Wow, my first longish soft porn and I'm getting accolades. Out of sight!
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All the more honored by your gesture I am and, for what it's worth, I hope you will win the contest ( out of sight, yes!) for there is a very thin line between a story with a plot and a message and the more easy "friction description". If it true many earn money by the latter, many leave a mark by the first. My example is the movie "Ghost" with Demi Moore and Patrick Swayze compared with Sandra Brown a so called writer.
Your story and my aim at the contest was the Ghost category although right now I'd do the second category for the money, as the wages I have fall in the sexual abuse category.
Once again, thanks for your input and support. Your name has brought prestige to the contest.
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You are very gracious.
May I suggest a stint as a gigalo to shore up the finances? Think how much classier that word sounds (not to mention the service you would provide) than male whore...LOL...Just having some fun with words.
Now a very wise person said recently the difference between erotic and porn is that erotica preys on the senses and imagination while porn is graphic and all visual.
I loved the scene in 'Ghost,' and especially the vulnerability of Demi Moore when Whoppi kissed her and she felt Swayze in the touch.
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I don't think my wife would allow that extent, nor that my abilities would allow me to cope...Writing is more innocent.
Yes, that was a great movie...A recent similar is "Lovestruck" with Sara Paxton, a great musical also...
Or Burlesque with Cher and Christina Aguilera.
A good comedy "Gigalo" with Adam Sandler...but such a hard life...
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I don't usual read much of this stuff. But, I think you wrote a good story and it was handled well. I figure there is a lesson to be learned here...being past my prime and all:-)
Thanks for posting, i am glad I read it,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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Hi. I don't usual read much of this stuff. But, I think you wrote a good story and it was handled well. I figure there is a lesson to be learned here...being past my prime and all:-)
Thanks for posting, i am glad I read it,
padumachitta
Comment Written 05-May-2014
reply by the author on 05-May-2014
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I think our prime depends on circumstances. I'm into my 60s and a born-again virgin for 15 years since my husband died, but I do think that physical intimacy in a marriage is important.
I don't usually write this kind of thing either, so thanks for reading.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I don't think I could let someone watch us have sex. Too personal to me. But I know many people who have this issue, an issue not many want to admit they have. I hope Will and I never have this issue but after years of marriage and one day kids I'm sure we'll also have our ups and downs as well
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I don't think I could let someone watch us have sex. Too personal to me. But I know many people who have this issue, an issue not many want to admit they have. I hope Will and I never have this issue but after years of marriage and one day kids I'm sure we'll also have our ups and downs as well
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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And yet, women have told me--honest they have--that sex is hotter when they 'do it' in a semi-public place, where the possibility of being seen exists.
Really, I've been a born-again virgin since my husband died 15 years ago, but, I remember...
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There is a difference in doing it somewhere where you can get caught and knowing when someone is for sure watching and judging everything you're doing. LOL
Comment from debskatz
Hey,
I've read all of the entries so far and felt terribly let down. That is, until I read yours. Your story is sensuality at its best! Absolutely beautiful to read.
Did find one spag:
"me with my tits on display and (you) with (your) pants around your knees."
This is the only spot in the story where it seems you're talking to Wayne. Might want to change it!
Lovely story. Thanks for sharing it!
smiles,
deb xo
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Hey,
I've read all of the entries so far and felt terribly let down. That is, until I read yours. Your story is sensuality at its best! Absolutely beautiful to read.
Did find one spag:
"me with my tits on display and (you) with (your) pants around your knees."
This is the only spot in the story where it seems you're talking to Wayne. Might want to change it!
Lovely story. Thanks for sharing it!
smiles,
deb xo
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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You were so right about that sentence. Already corrected and man, many thanks. I'm reminded of something N.K.Wagner, the publisher and editor of Page and Spine said to me. She told me that even an editor needs an editor. I self-edit over and over again, but inevitably something slips by me. I am very appreciative that you found my error.
All these stars are going to my head. I'm very humbled.
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Hey, they are well deserved! Glad I could help. I've definitely found out, like you, no matter how much I self edit, it still needs someone else's eyes.
This is the first time I've been on here in a while. It was good to see some great writing going on!!
Comment from Sasha
This is a fantastic entry for this fascinating contest. I plan to read all the entries. Great work with this one. You pulled no punches and followed the rules to T. As I said, excellent work with this one. This is terrific entry and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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This is a fantastic entry for this fascinating contest. I plan to read all the entries. Great work with this one. You pulled no punches and followed the rules to T. As I said, excellent work with this one. This is terrific entry and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I swear to you, I had to mine deep to recover some of those memories, but like I always maintain, truth in writing is to get naked and just let it go.
Thanks for all the razzle-dazzle. I do appreciate it.
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Well, I am pleased the memories surfaced. You did a terrific job with this one.
Comment from boxergirl
Good job with your story for the sensuality contest. It is definitely full of sensual imagery and I like the fact that they were dealing with the issue, which unfortunately, many couples do not. The only complaint I have is when you referenced the neighbor in the sex shop who was pushing 60. Don't count us older ones out just yet. 8-)
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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Good job with your story for the sensuality contest. It is definitely full of sensual imagery and I like the fact that they were dealing with the issue, which unfortunately, many couples do not. The only complaint I have is when you referenced the neighbor in the sex shop who was pushing 60. Don't count us older ones out just yet. 8-)
Comment Written 04-May-2014
reply by the author on 04-May-2014
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I'm older than sixty--threw it in because many younger people have a real image issue with sexually active seniors. Have no idea why, thanks.
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ha! yes, they do. 8-)
