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A Collection Of Short Form Poetry

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Comment from humpwhistle
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And it all does seem like a mad dash, doesn't it, Mikey?
Not at first. But the closer we get to the finish line
the faster it happened--and happens.
All I can say is, Keep on trucking.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 02-May-2014

Comment from Jackarrie
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A very enjoyable poem, I like the way you have used the text to illustrate the pace. The presentation with the suitable image all make for a fine nonet poem.

Well done. Mary

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 Comment Written 02-May-2014

Comment from ProjectBluebook
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You are a genius Mikey. Great concept, making the words smaller, it looks awesome! I can most definitely learn a trick or two from you. Sad, you didn't enter. This is a piece of art. Dam---you are getting creative. Some people stick with the usual boring stuff but not you! II like it, Mikey. wackydo

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 Comment Written 02-May-2014