From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Winds of change."Mostly romance.
19 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
this is a very nice piece of poetic art
this is true to your style and form
there is nothing to suggest
as this poem is just fine the way that it is... John
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this is a very nice piece of poetic art
this is true to your style and form
there is nothing to suggest
as this poem is just fine the way that it is... John
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from shelley kaye
kinda a dreamy feel to this
very understandable and relatable
excellent flow and rhythm
one of your best
fave stanza....
"Until reality
bites me,
awaking
the never
ending circles
of doubts"
thanx for shairng :-)
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kinda a dreamy feel to this
very understandable and relatable
excellent flow and rhythm
one of your best
fave stanza....
"Until reality
bites me,
awaking
the never
ending circles
of doubts"
thanx for shairng :-)
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from SamPark
The cycle of change is about the nearest thing to a constant we have, but even that will change as the cycle turns to our dying phase and we end. You have done a good job describing the process and the submission required in order to live through it. Turning the process from fear to a cautious but open acceptance is a good description of a useful response to change.
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The cycle of change is about the nearest thing to a constant we have, but even that will change as the cycle turns to our dying phase and we end. You have done a good job describing the process and the submission required in order to live through it. Turning the process from fear to a cautious but open acceptance is a good description of a useful response to change.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
I liked this its very good the picture goes with it to , the only thing I will mention is that I personally think you could of added more words to the lines this would neaten it out a bit and add to presentation qualities very good work keep at it and good luck
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I liked this its very good the picture goes with it to , the only thing I will mention is that I personally think you could of added more words to the lines this would neaten it out a bit and add to presentation qualities very good work keep at it and good luck
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from Tallteller
"In silent gentleness riding on the winds of change" will haunt my dreams and those moments in life when the soul seeks to fly. What is poetry I ask? I need only remember these lines. I am the richer, thanks for sharing - oh too generous is your heart!
All the best, you are...!
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"In silent gentleness riding on the winds of change" will haunt my dreams and those moments in life when the soul seeks to fly. What is poetry I ask? I need only remember these lines. I am the richer, thanks for sharing - oh too generous is your heart!
All the best, you are...!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from aBoxofBrokenCrayons
What a relaxing poem. I noticed a had a smile on after I had read it. =] I like the breakdown you have the words. It's perfect... Keep up the good work. By the way... cute pug.
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What a relaxing poem. I noticed a had a smile on after I had read it. =] I like the breakdown you have the words. It's perfect... Keep up the good work. By the way... cute pug.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from garoestel
A very good poem.... the rhyming is hard to follow sometimes, but the short lines add to a feeling that the verses are pulling you towards the end. A wonderful picture of love. Very nice!
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A very good poem.... the rhyming is hard to follow sometimes, but the short lines add to a feeling that the verses are pulling you towards the end. A wonderful picture of love. Very nice!
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from J. Grubbs
I thought this poem was well written and very descriptive. My favorite part was "awakening the never ending circles of doubts" Thank you for sharing this with me.
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I thought this poem was well written and very descriptive. My favorite part was "awakening the never ending circles of doubts" Thank you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
Comment from Hetty
Hi Pili,
Yes and it can be sooo hard to do at times. Another fresh piece from you Pili with a thought process clearly laid out in simple, heartfelt universal terms.
Good rhythm and imagery throughout.
Excellent work, lass.
No nits.
Hetty
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Hi Pili,
Yes and it can be sooo hard to do at times. Another fresh piece from you Pili with a thought process clearly laid out in simple, heartfelt universal terms.
Good rhythm and imagery throughout.
Excellent work, lass.
No nits.
Hetty
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Comment Written 17-Aug-2005
