Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The Awakening"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
4 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Love the opening, snod. Oz is such a narcissist, he finds it likely that Ess dreams of him. LOL!
"Why are you here, sleeping on my couch, when you know there is an unspoken pact between us that you will eventually share my bed with me...?" I love how you make Oz totally delusional. LOL!
"She wanted to, but she couldn't find a pole long enough to touch you with." LOL! You crack me up, you nut case! LOL!
"It has a little nurse's hat and everything."! Your Oz is such a fun little perv. "My sap's rising. Want a look?" ROFLMAO! Thanks, snod. I chuckled all the way through this one, with a few guffaws thrown in for good measure. Pure fun!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Love the opening, snod. Oz is such a narcissist, he finds it likely that Ess dreams of him. LOL!
"Why are you here, sleeping on my couch, when you know there is an unspoken pact between us that you will eventually share my bed with me...?" I love how you make Oz totally delusional. LOL!
"She wanted to, but she couldn't find a pole long enough to touch you with." LOL! You crack me up, you nut case! LOL!
"It has a little nurse's hat and everything."! Your Oz is such a fun little perv. "My sap's rising. Want a look?" ROFLMAO! Thanks, snod. I chuckled all the way through this one, with a few guffaws thrown in for good measure. Pure fun!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I'm flattered, thank you. Glad it gave you a laugh
Comment from Green Lake Girl
I love this chapter, Snod. Oz is incorrigible. It seems he feels like a new man after the fairy whammy. However, they are not closer to discovering where Daisy is.
Love the expression, "Were we on the razzle last night?" That's a new one.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I love this chapter, Snod. Oz is incorrigible. It seems he feels like a new man after the fairy whammy. However, they are not closer to discovering where Daisy is.
Love the expression, "Were we on the razzle last night?" That's a new one.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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I suspect, Oz being Oz, he feels like a new woman, preferably 20 yrs old. On the razzle is a pretty stock UK phrase, I'm afraid. Not my invention. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
Comment from comanalbert
That was fun. Fun to read and humorous written. Half of the talent you've shown in here will be enough to blow out the competition in the contest I dedicated to you and a few others...maybe: Lancelot, Marilion and GreenLakeGirl have already signed in.
Anyway, great chapter!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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That was fun. Fun to read and humorous written. Half of the talent you've shown in here will be enough to blow out the competition in the contest I dedicated to you and a few others...maybe: Lancelot, Marilion and GreenLakeGirl have already signed in.
Anyway, great chapter!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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You're very kind. Thanks for the review and generous score
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It wad well deserved! Got time for the contest?
Comment from GracieAnn
snodlander, this chapter has interesting dialogue with descriptive word usage. Though I have jumped in with no prior knowledge, the write seems to be sound. You may want to make a list of characters with each chapter to help new readers to familiarize themselves with the characters. Well written. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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snodlander, this chapter has interesting dialogue with descriptive word usage. Though I have jumped in with no prior knowledge, the write seems to be sound. You may want to make a list of characters with each chapter to help new readers to familiarize themselves with the characters. Well written. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks. Yes, I normally list the characters, but as there were only two in this chapter and I'm a lazy git I didn't bother.
