NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Love Relationships"30 Days of Poetry
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Comment from Joan E.
As you can see, I'm trying to catch up again, but you make it difficult with your dedication to the poem-a-day regiment. I applaud your discipline and creativity. I particularly liked your question in the second stanza and your abundant use of alliteration in the answer. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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As you can see, I'm trying to catch up again, but you make it difficult with your dedication to the poem-a-day regiment. I applaud your discipline and creativity. I particularly liked your question in the second stanza and your abundant use of alliteration in the answer. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Just wishing everyone a happily ever after love life.
Thank you. Goodnight :)
Comment from Starlit Ink
You describe love from start to finish, and how each step has chemistry. Nice use of alliteration in the second stanza made it flow with ease. Fantastic ending with "relish romance." This poem would be a great answer to the question: "What is love?"
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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You describe love from start to finish, and how each step has chemistry. Nice use of alliteration in the second stanza made it flow with ease. Fantastic ending with "relish romance." This poem would be a great answer to the question: "What is love?"
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you.
Have a great week :)
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"Love Relationships" is excellent free style poetry. It has good structure, good figurative language and imagery (let desires dance from dusk to dawn)good alliteration and internal rhyme (chemistry and compatibility).
Preston
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
"Love Relationships" is excellent free style poetry. It has good structure, good figurative language and imagery (let desires dance from dusk to dawn)good alliteration and internal rhyme (chemistry and compatibility).
Preston
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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It's actually a Curtal Sonnet. I wrote structure in the author notes. Thank you :)
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A Rose is a rose by any name. Whatever it is it is a good poem. With so many people claiming so many I just try to see if they are good poetry without nit picking adherence to a form.
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Alicia. So well written this poem about love and relationship. You desribed it from the beginning till the end with smooth flow and nice alliteration. I think you can't search for love, it happens spontaniously.
A great one, girl!!! Fia
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hi Alicia. So well written this poem about love and relationship. You desribed it from the beginning till the end with smooth flow and nice alliteration. I think you can't search for love, it happens spontaniously.
A great one, girl!!! Fia
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a great week :)
Comment from country ranch writer
LOVE RELATIONSHIPS USUALLY START OUT SLOW GETTING TO KNOW ONE ANOTHER AND THEN THEY TAKE IT UP ANOTHER NOTCH HANGING OUT AND THEN BEING LOVERS IN THE END
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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LOVE RELATIONSHIPS USUALLY START OUT SLOW GETTING TO KNOW ONE ANOTHER AND THEN THEY TAKE IT UP ANOTHER NOTCH HANGING OUT AND THEN BEING LOVERS IN THE END
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Can't hurry it along either... thank you :)
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welcome
Comment from donette1914
Very well written and very creative and I enjoyed this piece of love and relationship, Chemistry and compatibility
Builds the couple for romance and compassion, outstanding!!!!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Very well written and very creative and I enjoyed this piece of love and relationship, Chemistry and compatibility
Builds the couple for romance and compassion, outstanding!!!!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Glasstruth
It all boils down to chemistry. No dating service, or anyone else can explain that when it happens. I think that's the answer to "How does awkwardness lead to harmony?"
Rock on! Les
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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It all boils down to chemistry. No dating service, or anyone else can explain that when it happens. I think that's the answer to "How does awkwardness lead to harmony?"
Rock on! Les
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Jackarrie
I love your poem about love, how you have brought the emotions from the very beginning to the complete fruition of the sinfully sweet sensuality. Your image with the relevant words written in a lovely touch to your well written poem.
Well done. Mary
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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I love your poem about love, how you have brought the emotions from the very beginning to the complete fruition of the sinfully sweet sensuality. Your image with the relevant words written in a lovely touch to your well written poem.
Well done. Mary
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from krys123
Sunni, and excellent written piece of poetry which is very illuminated and stimulating and which brings that your inventiveness is truly creative. I found it to be very sensual and erotic and reveals how relationships starts from beginning and throughout the relationship. Thank you for sharing and posting this and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Sunni, and excellent written piece of poetry which is very illuminated and stimulating and which brings that your inventiveness is truly creative. I found it to be very sensual and erotic and reveals how relationships starts from beginning and throughout the relationship. Thank you for sharing and posting this and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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It is creative, however, based upon psycological truths and freud theories. A majority (probably 85 to 90 percent) of normal relationships follow a standard succession of events. You are very kind. Thank you.
God bless you always. Peace :)
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You are so sincerely welcome Sunni
Comment from Rainbowsofhappiness
A very astute observation of the mixture of euphoria and awkwardness that one experiences when in love. I like the way the writer details the journey towards love in this poem starting with initial flirting and increasing in intensity until full out romance occurs. Great imagery is evident in this piece through the use of a YouTube video and the well chosen photo to show the stages of romance. The light pink background also provides a hint of romance. The poem contains great alliteration in chemistry/compatibility, togetherness/transpire, desires/dance/dusk/dawn, sinfully/sweet/sensuality, heart/happier, and relish/romance. The lines of this poem flow well and the choice of the writer to separate the poem into two distinct stanzas each discussing separate stages of falling in love, the first supplying the lead in to the start of the relationship, the second stanza detailing the intensity of the relationship, is well done. This poem is descriptive, true to life, and has an ability to allow the reader to intimately connect with the emotions and feelings discussed.
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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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A very astute observation of the mixture of euphoria and awkwardness that one experiences when in love. I like the way the writer details the journey towards love in this poem starting with initial flirting and increasing in intensity until full out romance occurs. Great imagery is evident in this piece through the use of a YouTube video and the well chosen photo to show the stages of romance. The light pink background also provides a hint of romance. The poem contains great alliteration in chemistry/compatibility, togetherness/transpire, desires/dance/dusk/dawn, sinfully/sweet/sensuality, heart/happier, and relish/romance. The lines of this poem flow well and the choice of the writer to separate the poem into two distinct stanzas each discussing separate stages of falling in love, the first supplying the lead in to the start of the relationship, the second stanza detailing the intensity of the relationship, is well done. This poem is descriptive, true to life, and has an ability to allow the reader to intimately connect with the emotions and feelings discussed.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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You're very kind. Thank you.
Have wonderful evening :)
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You're welcome for the review and you are kind as well to nominate me for the reviewer contest! Have a fabulous day! :-)
