National Poetry Month
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "A Love so Deep"Thirty poems in Thirty Days
18 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Debbie, this Love Poem Poetry Contest entry is full of the imagery and language that love elicits within each of us who have had that experience of a life time love. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Debbie, this Love Poem Poetry Contest entry is full of the imagery and language that love elicits within each of us who have had that experience of a life time love. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
A love so deep is what I have experienced for more than 70 with my sweet mate. Your write is not only what we feel for each other but it gets easier every day. You can only write a poem like this when you have experienced it. Thanks for sharing. Bob
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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A love so deep is what I have experienced for more than 70 with my sweet mate. Your write is not only what we feel for each other but it gets easier every day. You can only write a poem like this when you have experienced it. Thanks for sharing. Bob
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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70 years--that's awesome. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debbie,
sometimes things conveyed so simply just say what they need to... straight to the point... how could I love you any more than I do? When it's true love... you can't... I would give my life for you... enough said!
All the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create,
commitment,
James xx
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Hi Debbie,
sometimes things conveyed so simply just say what they need to... straight to the point... how could I love you any more than I do? When it's true love... you can't... I would give my life for you... enough said!
All the very best in this contest.
With our thoughts we create,
commitment,
James xx
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Hi, dear friend. I am trying to get caught up. Sorry this is so late. I hope you are having a good day~Debbie xx
Comment from l.raven
so very touching...I a poem with words of real true love...love that you would die for...so very well written....and I love the colors and the pucture
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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so very touching...I a poem with words of real true love...love that you would die for...so very well written....and I love the colors and the pucture
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie
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you are always so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Petriesan
Good luck in the contest. I think the poem is straightforward and simple, with no abiligy to be misunderstood. You love t he person for whom this was written. Good work
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Good luck in the contest. I think the poem is straightforward and simple, with no abiligy to be misunderstood. You love t he person for whom this was written. Good work
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this poem. Once again you impressed me with the flow and the rhyming scheme. This is a strong love poem contest entry and I am sure this poem will show well.
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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I enjoyed reading this poem. Once again you impressed me with the flow and the rhyming scheme. This is a strong love poem contest entry and I am sure this poem will show well.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of mono-rhyming
effective use of repetition to emphasize the speaker's point
you're my palette's favorite hue - love that line in this wonderfully romantic poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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solid use of mono-rhyming
effective use of repetition to emphasize the speaker's point
you're my palette's favorite hue - love that line in this wonderfully romantic poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you, my friend. ~Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Debbie - this was good but I thought it needed a bit of smoothing out.
This line "any more strong and true?" - I think needs a look at.
Your poetry is always so vibrant and rich in imagery....for me this one was a bit below that mark, still good but could easily be great.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
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Dear Debbie - this was good but I thought it needed a bit of smoothing out.
This line "any more strong and true?" - I think needs a look at.
Your poetry is always so vibrant and rich in imagery....for me this one was a bit below that mark, still good but could easily be great.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
Comment from mumsyone
You're my palette's favorite hue,
I would give my life for you.
Nice presentation, Debbie, for a heartfelt poem.
Hugs,
Lois
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You're my palette's favorite hue,
I would give my life for you.
Nice presentation, Debbie, for a heartfelt poem.
Hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
Comment from royowen
A very nice entry into this love poetry contest Debbie! It is a beautifully worded work as usual, Debbie. The descriptive language creates imagery that is like an artists canvass, well done with this one, well done, blessings, Roy.
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A very nice entry into this love poetry contest Debbie! It is a beautifully worded work as usual, Debbie. The descriptive language creates imagery that is like an artists canvass, well done with this one, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
