NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "A Monkey"30 Days of Poetry
9 total reviews
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"A Monkey" is a excellent free style poem with a better structure. It has some good figurative language (chunky monkey,funky monkey but for me the flow is interrupted in the last line of the 3rd stanza therefore I cannot give it an exceptional rating.
Preston
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
"A Monkey" is a excellent free style poem with a better structure. It has some good figurative language (chunky monkey,funky monkey but for me the flow is interrupted in the last line of the 3rd stanza therefore I cannot give it an exceptional rating.
Preston
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Okay, I will admit it... not all monkeys play cute or act noisily. Thank you. God bless you always. Peace :)
Comment from country ranch writer
MONKEYS ARE QUICK LEARNERS AND ARE SAID TO BE RELATED TO MAN SAYS A LOT FOR MAN KIND HEHE JUST JOKING. THEY HAVE GONE INTO OUTER SPACE SO SOMETHIG MUST BE GOING RIGHT IN THEIR LIFE. MONKEING AROUND HERE AND THERE JUST SAYING
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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MONKEYS ARE QUICK LEARNERS AND ARE SAID TO BE RELATED TO MAN SAYS A LOT FOR MAN KIND HEHE JUST JOKING. THEY HAVE GONE INTO OUTER SPACE SO SOMETHIG MUST BE GOING RIGHT IN THEIR LIFE. MONKEING AROUND HERE AND THERE JUST SAYING
Comment Written 28-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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You're funny. Thank you :)
Comment from 9999pool
Haha, the impecable monkey, orang utans and the the circus monkey and they are just monkeys who like to monkey around for good measure.
I am born in the year of the Fire Monkey in the Chinese calender. The funny thing is that all those videos reminded us so much about ourselves. We also like to imitate our neighbors - when they plant roses, we will as well.
When they get a pet dog, we got ourselves a cat. When they drove into their garage a fancy new car, we at least can afford a bicycle, smiles.
The write is excellent and well executed with humor and the videos punched in the kaboom! It all adds to the ingenuity of the writer - combining wit with humor and telling a story of humans in a funny banana way - cute and adorable.
The monkey in the bra got to get first prize in the video series, of course.
Very detailed effort and homework on this particular write about the naughty and teasing monkeys with their monkey business as usual, smiles.
Excellent write, bravo, brilliant!
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
P.S. I am still chuckling now.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Haha, the impecable monkey, orang utans and the the circus monkey and they are just monkeys who like to monkey around for good measure.
I am born in the year of the Fire Monkey in the Chinese calender. The funny thing is that all those videos reminded us so much about ourselves. We also like to imitate our neighbors - when they plant roses, we will as well.
When they get a pet dog, we got ourselves a cat. When they drove into their garage a fancy new car, we at least can afford a bicycle, smiles.
The write is excellent and well executed with humor and the videos punched in the kaboom! It all adds to the ingenuity of the writer - combining wit with humor and telling a story of humans in a funny banana way - cute and adorable.
The monkey in the bra got to get first prize in the video series, of course.
Very detailed effort and homework on this particular write about the naughty and teasing monkeys with their monkey business as usual, smiles.
Excellent write, bravo, brilliant!
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
P.S. I am still chuckling now.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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The 7-week monkey was my favorite video too. Thank you.
Have a great week :)
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sunni, they are so cute...I love your poem...just moves right along...and your video are great...so very well written...made me smile...Luff Linda xoo
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Hi Sunni, they are so cute...I love your poem...just moves right along...and your video are great...so very well written...made me smile...Luff Linda xoo
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a great weekend :)
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thank you and you have one too...luff
Comment from krys123
Sunni, I enjoyed your phone very much of the Monkey and your videos which all help complement your poem very much. I must say I was stimulated by all of it and I found all of your creation to be very informative and inventive. Your resourcefulness was beyond measure. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Sunni, I enjoyed your phone very much of the Monkey and your videos which all help complement your poem very much. I must say I was stimulated by all of it and I found all of your creation to be very informative and inventive. Your resourcefulness was beyond measure. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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You're nice. Thank you.
Have a blessed weekend :)
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You are so welcome Sunni
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You are so sincerely welcome Sunni
Comment from Ben Colder
If they run the first one for President I would vote for it. The second would help Hillary as running mate for sure. Oh well, Monkey see . Monkey do.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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If they run the first one for President I would vote for it. The second would help Hillary as running mate for sure. Oh well, Monkey see . Monkey do.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I never understood the animal representations for public offices. I think they use a donkey and elephant. Thank you. Have a good weekend :)
Comment from royowen
Great collection of videos Alicia, this is a lovely little poem about our supposedly near relative! Although I couldn't imagine visiting my Uncle Chimp, or my Aunt Muscles, a good one, I always enjoy your muses! Bless you, Roy.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Great collection of videos Alicia, this is a lovely little poem about our supposedly near relative! Although I couldn't imagine visiting my Uncle Chimp, or my Aunt Muscles, a good one, I always enjoy your muses! Bless you, Roy.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Monkeying around seems like the best vacation ever. Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
Comment from donette1914
very cute of this fun piece of this monkey and how adorable they really are and I felt you were very cleaver and it was a pleasure to read
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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very cute of this fun piece of this monkey and how adorable they really are and I felt you were very cleaver and it was a pleasure to read
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a good weekend
Comment from donaldww
The poet decided to monkey around today and skip the NoPoWriMo prompt.
A monkey has numerous attributes, from curiosity to playing cute. But in the end, it is:
Still just a monkey
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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The poet decided to monkey around today and skip the NoPoWriMo prompt.
A monkey has numerous attributes, from curiosity to playing cute. But in the end, it is:
Still just a monkey
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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"I have a candy bar" --- can just go so far.... Thank you. Have a great weekend :)
