NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Casual Living"30 Days of Poetry
8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
A fun commentary. Open-concept housing is my favorite. Allows the cook to visit with her/his guests without being isolated in the kitchen.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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A fun commentary. Open-concept housing is my favorite. Allows the cook to visit with her/his guests without being isolated in the kitchen.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your energetic, opening line and description of the open and unpretentious design. The arches and use of brick and stone in the pictures is seductive. I can only wish... Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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I relished your energetic, opening line and description of the open and unpretentious design. The arches and use of brick and stone in the pictures is seductive. I can only wish... Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Mafia family home.... Any dirty dealings go on at the Italian Restaurant, but never in the home. Understood. Just joking with you. Thank you.
Have a great weekend :)
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It could be true! Hope your weekend is splendid- Joan
Comment from krys123
Sunni, on a thank you for an architectural Display of a very nice place in fact a beautiful place. I found your rhymes to be neither forced, labored or displaced and your rhythm was flowing smoothly throughout the poem. I love Tuscany architecture and its arches and formulated round curvatures.
Thank you for sharing them posting this for others it may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Sunni, on a thank you for an architectural Display of a very nice place in fact a beautiful place. I found your rhymes to be neither forced, labored or displaced and your rhythm was flowing smoothly throughout the poem. I love Tuscany architecture and its arches and formulated round curvatures.
Thank you for sharing them posting this for others it may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you
God bless you too. Peace.
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You are so sincerely welcome Sunni.
And peace be with you
Comment from seren james
I enjoyed this poem. Good alliteration in casually coloured arches. The poem evokes imagery of a tuscan building. Good presentation and picture.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I enjoyed this poem. Good alliteration in casually coloured arches. The poem evokes imagery of a tuscan building. Good presentation and picture.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a nice weekend
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"Casual Living" is an excellent free style poem with good unconventional structure, good flow although slightly begins with a stressed syllable, some good figurative language and imagery (pretty slick for togetherness, casually colored arches) and some slant rhyme Tuscany/Privacy. I do not believe that ...casually... brick needs all of those commas.
Preston
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
"Casual Living" is an excellent free style poem with good unconventional structure, good flow although slightly begins with a stressed syllable, some good figurative language and imagery (pretty slick for togetherness, casually colored arches) and some slant rhyme Tuscany/Privacy. I do not believe that ...casually... brick needs all of those commas.
Preston
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a good weekend
Comment from 9999pool
The old and the new facade inside the interior design of the house.
At great lengths some will do the ultimate and even a house built upside down for good measure.
When there's a will, there's a way to make our homes look great - any which way we can and called it home, smiles.
Great fun write and entertaining to read too...oh, so pretentiously real are the arches, :))
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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The old and the new facade inside the interior design of the house.
At great lengths some will do the ultimate and even a house built upside down for good measure.
When there's a will, there's a way to make our homes look great - any which way we can and called it home, smiles.
Great fun write and entertaining to read too...oh, so pretentiously real are the arches, :))
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I guess when you have the beauty built-in, furnishing is lessened or modified to show off the beauty of the interior/exterior built. I dunno. Just a guess. Thank you :)
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You are right. If we overcrowd the house with furnishings, the design of the house is gone. We see trash and wood everywhere and cannot even notice the color of the walls, lol.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from country ranch writer
THE TWO STORY HOUSE WE USED TO LIVE IN HAD AN ARCHWAY TO SEPERATE THE KITCHEN AND THE DINING AREA AND ONE OVER THE KITCHEN SINK TOO
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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THE TWO STORY HOUSE WE USED TO LIVE IN HAD AN ARCHWAY TO SEPERATE THE KITCHEN AND THE DINING AREA AND ONE OVER THE KITCHEN SINK TOO
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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That's nice. I use to have a bookshelf and doorway with an arch. If there is wood, marble and/or floral detailing it's Persia and/or India inspired. Thank you :)
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SMILES
Comment from Glasstruth
The layout looks pretty neat. I like the colored arches. I see your concern about privacy. I imagine the bedrooms have doors. LOL. Can you see them without? It'd save the builder some money. Interesting and an entertaining write. Les
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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The layout looks pretty neat. I like the colored arches. I see your concern about privacy. I imagine the bedrooms have doors. LOL. Can you see them without? It'd save the builder some money. Interesting and an entertaining write. Les
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I guess some people let their family know everything. Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
I haven't been to Tuscany, but visited Umbria which is next door, we went Rome, L'Aqila, and Assisi, before sailing to the Adriatic Coast, nicely composed little gem here, Alicia, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I haven't been to Tuscany, but visited Umbria which is next door, we went Rome, L'Aqila, and Assisi, before sailing to the Adriatic Coast, nicely composed little gem here, Alicia, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Sounds like you had a wonderful Roman experience. I've never been to Italy. If I visit, I'd want to get an exorcism at the Vatican. I'm probably better off visiting London and eating fine chocolates at Harrods. Thank you :)
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Heh heh,heh, they're both wonderful places Alicia, whether chocolates or exorcism! Roy.
