Your life....
From conception to the grave.90 total reviews
Comment from Karen B.
Nice spiritual poem, and if we follow God we'll always find that path He intends us to walk. Especially liked these lines:
"For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view"
Sometimes it seems to take years and a lot of insight to see past hurts and grief and know where those gems lie.
Well done, as always.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Nice spiritual poem, and if we follow God we'll always find that path He intends us to walk. Especially liked these lines:
"For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view"
Sometimes it seems to take years and a lot of insight to see past hurts and grief and know where those gems lie.
Well done, as always.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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It's not easy, but worthwhile things never are Karen, thank you for these inspiring words and review. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! This poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes the enhanced the reading of this poem. The author's words were strong, creative and thought provoking.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Excellent Poem! This poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's notes the enhanced the reading of this poem. The author's words were strong, creative and thought provoking.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for this excellent and encouragingly positive review. Blessings Roy.
Comment from Rondeno
Life, it would seem, is a series of vague platitudes. I don't mean to be rude - sorry if that's how it comes across - but what exactly is your poem saying? "Hold captive, find, when you are strong" (?)
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Life, it would seem, is a series of vague platitudes. I don't mean to be rude - sorry if that's how it comes across - but what exactly is your poem saying? "Hold captive, find, when you are strong" (?)
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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You really need to read the authors notes! This is a declaration of thinking positively instead of your past life determining your future! Thank you for your review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Nosha17
I am a great believer in fate, also. I have faith and try to instil this faith in my children still, citing my own life as the example. You have made good choice of words and rhyme to convey your powerful message. Enjoyable read and rather super, pic. Faye
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I am a great believer in fate, also. I have faith and try to instil this faith in my children still, citing my own life as the example. You have made good choice of words and rhyme to convey your powerful message. Enjoyable read and rather super, pic. Faye
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Faye for your wonderfully positive and generous review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from GracieAnn
roy, this is exceptionally well written with engaging rhyme and meter. It is almost like a traveling beat which follows the them quite well. This promise, "For God has planted treasured gems,where the naked eye can't view", rings with such deep truth. Well constructed and delivered. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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roy, this is exceptionally well written with engaging rhyme and meter. It is almost like a traveling beat which follows the them quite well. This promise, "For God has planted treasured gems,where the naked eye can't view", rings with such deep truth. Well constructed and delivered. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Gracie, for your encouraging, kind and eloquent review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dean Kuch
An excellent poetic proclamation of faith in Christ and his purposes in our lives, Roy.
Your rhyming, meter and flow were spot-on, bulls-eye, my talented friend. The message you convey here is genuine and sincerely caring.
Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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An excellent poetic proclamation of faith in Christ and his purposes in our lives, Roy.
Your rhyming, meter and flow were spot-on, bulls-eye, my talented friend. The message you convey here is genuine and sincerely caring.
Well done!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dean, you are thoughtful and inspiring, and I appreciate it, blessings, Roy.
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My pleasure, Roy.
Comment from Cedar
I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem about our lives from birth to death and I agree with everything you have said. I especially liked your authors notes. Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I really enjoyed reading your wonderful poem about our lives from birth to death and I agree with everything you have said. I especially liked your authors notes. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you Bill, I appreciate your thoughts, encouragement, and kind review, blessing Roy.
Comment from Felix .P Year
is it suppose to be 'held captive' or did you deliberately put 'hold captive' there? "Your life is but a traveler's song,
from conception to the grave," this really is true, well how i feel at least, sometimes. I hope you find your glory or treasured gems my friend. Blessings!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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is it suppose to be 'held captive' or did you deliberately put 'hold captive' there? "Your life is but a traveler's song,
from conception to the grave," this really is true, well how i feel at least, sometimes. I hope you find your glory or treasured gems my friend. Blessings!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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You too Felix, I appreciate and thank for your kindness and thoughtful review. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from zanya
Yes indeed our life is but a journey ' a traveller's song'under God 'God has planted treasured gems'- yet it can be so difficult sometimes to view it that way
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Yes indeed our life is but a journey ' a traveller's song'under God 'God has planted treasured gems'- yet it can be so difficult sometimes to view it that way
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Yes believing can be difficult when things go wrong! But that's were faith comes in! Thank you for your thoughtful and kind.review. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Jaq Cee
A very profound message in your words.
I'm sure we are all following our own pre-destined paths. It is sometimes hard to understand why some things happen along the way, or where we end up at times too.
Beautiful picture to enhance your words. :) Jaq
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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A very profound message in your words.
I'm sure we are all following our own pre-destined paths. It is sometimes hard to understand why some things happen along the way, or where we end up at times too.
Beautiful picture to enhance your words. :) Jaq
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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I guess if we keep our eyes are on circumstance instead where we want to go. Our past shouldn't define our future! Thank you for your kind words and supportive review. Jaq, blessing, Roy.
