Your life....
From conception to the grave.90 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Roy, Truly a very inspirational and stimulating piece of poetry that brings me full circle in the study of my dreams in my travels through my life. I found your poem to be very creative and illuminative, inventive and so resourceful.
Your rhymes were neither forced, labored or strained and your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Roy, Truly a very inspirational and stimulating piece of poetry that brings me full circle in the study of my dreams in my travels through my life. I found your poem to be very creative and illuminative, inventive and so resourceful.
Your rhymes were neither forced, labored or strained and your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout the poem. Thank you for sharing and posting this for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for this very encouraging six, I know that when you give them it is high praise, although you've always been the most kind, and encouraging and sensitive reviewers online, thank you again, brother! Blessings, Roy.th
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You are so sincerely and entirely welcome Roy.
And you're right I only give about one six stars a day and I reviewed more than 40 Per day.
Alex
Comment from His Grayness
Dear Roy: I was going to wait till the new batches of sixes arrive this weekend but I could not hold back my eagerness to tell you how much I truly enjoyed this beautiful work. Actually this beautiful GIFT to all the Fanstory family. I know all things happen for a reason and God works magic we may never understand but please know: my soul needed this message right about now and I cannot thank you enough for delivering it... in service to God and me too! Bless you! Vance
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Dear Roy: I was going to wait till the new batches of sixes arrive this weekend but I could not hold back my eagerness to tell you how much I truly enjoyed this beautiful work. Actually this beautiful GIFT to all the Fanstory family. I know all things happen for a reason and God works magic we may never understand but please know: my soul needed this message right about now and I cannot thank you enough for delivering it... in service to God and me too! Bless you! Vance
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Vance for this most encouraging and heartfelt review, I was going to hold it back, but I knew that somehow God wanted me to post it, and you have ratified that conclusion, you have lifted me also, bless you my brother! Roy.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Three good stanzas in abab rhyme scheme, apart from line 3 of your third stanzas which breaks the scheme. Written by someone who believes in destiny - so any choices we make means they were pre-destined. You are not alone, many people would agree. Enjoyed your author notes - I hope a time to kill means in order to eat. LOL. A good read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Three good stanzas in abab rhyme scheme, apart from line 3 of your third stanzas which breaks the scheme. Written by someone who believes in destiny - so any choices we make means they were pre-destined. You are not alone, many people would agree. Enjoyed your author notes - I hope a time to kill means in order to eat. LOL. A good read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dorothy for this wonderful review! This is a commonly used set of scriptures, some uplifting, some confronting! I only meant this poem for good, as God is good, I do know that you are most loved of God! You are one of His faithful ones, I think it's true what you say! Bless you,Roy.
Comment from ravenblack
Life as a traveler's song, everything fresh and new and all about the journey. The seed of greatness is in all if us ...as long as we outpace and deafen the past' s persuasive talk. After all, when we drive, do we constantly stare into the rear view mirror? Well, you can if you want to end up in a ditch. Drink in the horizon and live the journey well.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Life as a traveler's song, everything fresh and new and all about the journey. The seed of greatness is in all if us ...as long as we outpace and deafen the past' s persuasive talk. After all, when we drive, do we constantly stare into the rear view mirror? Well, you can if you want to end up in a ditch. Drink in the horizon and live the journey well.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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You got it, I view a lot of writing online looking back, we can't change that, but we can make the present much better, and do I believe that is the attitude we are supposed to wear, I think we can make the future more fruitful, by being optimistic, apparently positive people live longer! I believe God has a purpose for all that only individuals can fill! Very accurate review! Blessings, Review!
Comment from TAB_that's me
don't let the past's persuasive talk steal your dream - I like that. Your poem is creative and meaningful. Live each day in the moment, we don't know when we'll be in the grave.
teresa
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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don't let the past's persuasive talk steal your dream - I like that. Your poem is creative and meaningful. Live each day in the moment, we don't know when we'll be in the grave.
teresa
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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You're so right Teresa, don't let the the past steal your future! Great review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with walk/talk. Good alliteration with seek/spirit...search/seen...past's/persuasive...vision's/view. Good rhythm and flow. Good eye catching photo followed by a clear message.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with walk/talk. Good alliteration with seek/spirit...search/seen...past's/persuasive...vision's/view. Good rhythm and flow. Good eye catching photo followed by a clear message.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for the encouraging and in depth review,bother, Roy.
Comment from Kingsland
This poem is well written and flows evenly within its thoughts and phrases. I think your title should be your life and not you life, as that is grammatically incorrect. I enjoyed reading the body of thoughts in your poem, no matter what the title is... John
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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This poem is well written and flows evenly within its thoughts and phrases. I think your title should be your life and not you life, as that is grammatically incorrect. I enjoyed reading the body of thoughts in your poem, no matter what the title is... John
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much ror you wonderful review! It's a an oversight, you're right of course! Blessings, Roy,
Comment from Ben Colder
Had I seven stars they would be yours. The Word of God is pure and always inviting. You penned this very well and enhanced it with life. My blessings.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Had I seven stars they would be yours. The Word of God is pure and always inviting. You penned this very well and enhanced it with life. My blessings.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Ben you are ver encouraging and ever supportive, blessings, Roy.
Comment from AnnieDawn
I read and enjoyed your poem, especially when you gave the scripture that you were working from. The only suggestion I have is to work on getting the rhythm to blend more as some of your sentences in your stanzas throw the rhythm off. Example - 4th line in the second stanza you could leave out the word 'to' and it would bend in with the rhythm perfectly. Good job and well done.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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I read and enjoyed your poem, especially when you gave the scripture that you were working from. The only suggestion I have is to work on getting the rhythm to blend more as some of your sentences in your stanzas throw the rhythm off. Example - 4th line in the second stanza you could leave out the word 'to' and it would bend in with the rhythm perfectly. Good job and well done.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Than k you Annie for your suggestion and your great review, Blessings, Roy,
Comment from DR DIP
beautiful roy 'Comes to steal your harvest's dream" love that line especially. You have a lovely way with words Roy your poems are always a pleasure to read
dip
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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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beautiful roy 'Comes to steal your harvest's dream" love that line especially. You have a lovely way with words Roy your poems are always a pleasure to read
dip
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Comment Written 24-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014
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Thank you Dip, and you are always like a warm encouraging breeze! I appreciate you muchly. Blessings, Dip.
