Your life....
From conception to the grave.90 total reviews
Comment from Frankeddy
Very nice poem, so well rhymed with good flow.
Most interesting and mysterious drawing to accompany your poem.
I like that thought that we all have an appointed destiny.
All presented in a clear and bright setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Very nice poem, so well rhymed with good flow.
Most interesting and mysterious drawing to accompany your poem.
I like that thought that we all have an appointed destiny.
All presented in a clear and bright setting.
Well done. Frankeddy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your wonderful, encouraging, and generous review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very good royowen
You are so right when you say each one of has a destiny-
when you said-
seek where the Spirit craves!
You'll always find the path to walk,
only search when you have seen,
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Very good royowen
You are so right when you say each one of has a destiny-
when you said-
seek where the Spirit craves!
You'll always find the path to walk,
only search when you have seen,
Gert
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you Gert, for this most encouraging,and generous review. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
Your life is but a traveler's song, STRONG INTRO
from conception to the grave,
past's persuasive 'p' alliteration
STEAL AWAY your harvest's dream!
For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view,
it's sown within your vision's hem,
reap when HARVEST time is due!
A religious message well phrased and presented.
Regards:
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Your life is but a traveler's song, STRONG INTRO
from conception to the grave,
past's persuasive 'p' alliteration
STEAL AWAY your harvest's dream!
For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view,
it's sown within your vision's hem,
reap when HARVEST time is due!
A religious message well phrased and presented.
Regards:
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you Steve, welcome back from the twilight zone, and thank you for most encouraging. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from skye
A traveler's song... terrific metaphor for a life. You chose well, carried the music throughout, from conception to grave, and finished with the metaphor of the harvest. Love it. You made this poem speak volumes about hope and joy, life and death.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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A traveler's song... terrific metaphor for a life. You chose well, carried the music throughout, from conception to grave, and finished with the metaphor of the harvest. Love it. You made this poem speak volumes about hope and joy, life and death.
Excellent.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2014
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Thank you for these wonderfully affirming comments and review, blessings, Roy
Comment from l.raven
Hi Roy, your poem is so very true...just take the right path and God will plant the seed...just look in the right place...so very well thought of...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Hi Roy, your poem is so very true...just take the right path and God will plant the seed...just look in the right place...so very well thought of...and very well written...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your most encouraging and affirming review, Luff Linda, I appreciate them. Blessings, Roy.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from Petriesan
a life as a travelers song. . .our actions his lyric? or melody?
god does hide the best part of humans away deeply, and sometimes they can only be located through pain
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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a life as a travelers song. . .our actions his lyric? or melody?
god does hide the best part of humans away deeply, and sometimes they can only be located through pain
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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That is the main source,, it doesn't have to be, but it seems that is the way it is! Your affirming comments are most appreciated. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from rouskin
I couldn't agree more :To everything there is a season, a time for every purpose under heaven.
For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view,
it's sown within your vision's hem,
reap when season's time is due!
Powerful poem Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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I couldn't agree more :To everything there is a season, a time for every purpose under heaven.
For God has planted treasured gems,
where the naked eye can't view,
it's sown within your vision's hem,
reap when season's time is due!
Powerful poem Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much for your supportive and affirming and positive review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Charlene0513
To royowen,
In your own words you have described how searching for one's dreams will only transpire when the Lord has made that pathway for you to increase in measure by the treasures that you have sown.
Nice metaphor: treasured gems,it's sown within your vision's hem
Charlene
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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To royowen,
In your own words you have described how searching for one's dreams will only transpire when the Lord has made that pathway for you to increase in measure by the treasures that you have sown.
Nice metaphor: treasured gems,it's sown within your vision's hem
Charlene
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you for this supportive, encouraging and kindly review. Blessings, Roy.
Comment from LoannaLois
This is a 6. What a mind challenging poem filled with possibilities of our destiny, if we seek, find, and knock. Your writing always encourages me and I have learned, also...that others struggle to be what we are to be.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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This is a 6. What a mind challenging poem filled with possibilities of our destiny, if we seek, find, and knock. Your writing always encourages me and I have learned, also...that others struggle to be what we are to be.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Yes, I was writing as much for me as anyone, it's like hiding Easter eggs for your children to find expecting they will find them. But we tend to look back! Thank you for this most inspiring and encouraging review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your poem is lovely and your authors notes are too. Sometimes we tend to think we are not good enough to pursue that chosen dream, we don't have the confidence to come out and do what we really want to.
... don't let the past's persuasive talk,
come to steal your harvest's dream!...
those words are often the cause of disappointments. The past interferes with our futures too many times. Brilliant poem and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Your poem is lovely and your authors notes are too. Sometimes we tend to think we are not good enough to pursue that chosen dream, we don't have the confidence to come out and do what we really want to.
... don't let the past's persuasive talk,
come to steal your harvest's dream!...
those words are often the cause of disappointments. The past interferes with our futures too many times. Brilliant poem and a pleasure to read. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you Sandra, I always enjoy your comments, you are an encouragement and supportive, poets are a source of depth and comfort! As you are! Blessings, Roy.
