Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Nancyjam

I love the pix - that era is such a lovely place in time. The message in your poem was beautiful as well. Very heartfelt.
I love these opening lines:
(I hear you on the breeze where every word you say is whispered in the trees.)

Well done.

Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

thank you for this wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

There is so much to feel, enjoy more the heart can hold. You did not only write the word but dance with the rhyme of its beautiful rendition in simple expressions and language.
More than the emotional happiness that one can imagine. Smile, smile, smile... and thank you so much for this wonderful read. Romance in the life of two is wonderful. } Lin

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

thank you so much for your lovely review. Glad you liked the poem. Nancy

reply by linsbm on 26-Apr-2014

Nancy, You are most welcome.

Comment from Njorgensen

Excellent

I always love this style of poetry. The rhyming is well-placed and effective. I liked the story. It transported me to a time of romanticism. Very well done.

Njorgensen

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for your lovely, thoughtful review. Nancy

Comment from akulkumol

Excellent

Really a heart touching poem, your love for the unknown sweetheart is great. The more was added to it by the nice feelings of nature. It was lovely read. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thank you so much for your gracious review. I am glad you enjoyed it. Nancy