Comment from Willowsong

Excellent

A beautiful depiction of loneliness and longing for a loved one whose far away. Had wonderful rhythm and rhyme to it with a quaint image portraying a lady in waiting. 'You're with me every night when e're the ocean sighs' truly captures that heart aching emotion.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

so glad you enjoyed it. thank you for your lovely review. Nancy

reply by Willowsong on 25-Apr-2014

You're most welcome...cheers! :-)

Comment from Siouxsun

Exceptional

Captivating from the start. A sweet love poem and loss of without being to melodramatic. Sincerely portrays the inner workings of the heart.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Oh thank you so much for your lovely review and six rating. I am so pleased you enjoyed it and appreciate your support. Nancy

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Nancy, such a beautiful poem...so romantic...I miss you when your gone....I see you in my dreams...if only you were here...sigh...very well written...luff Linda xx oo

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thanks so much Linda. Glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

reply by l.raven on 24-Apr-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is a lovely romance/love poem. Your meter is wonderful (something I don't do) and your rhymes are great. Sonnet form is it?
Teresa

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Hi Teresa, thank you for reading and for your lovely review. No not a Sonnet. Not sure it's any particular form. Just came out this way. Nancy

Comment from emrpoems

Exceptional

So romantically sweet and simple and pure.
Fascinating picture
Solid aabb rhymes
Such a gentle yet intense longing for that loved one to be near

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thank yo so much for the six and for your kind review. Much appreciated. Nancy

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes indeed there can be simply no substitute for real love - tangible love we can feel - how our hearts yearn 'dreams cannot replace/ your love'- lovely wistful pose in the pic

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thank yo zanya for the lovely review. Glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I no longer hide my loneliness and it is that very loneliness that makes you muse of connection, your yearning bringing the One you love into all of nature, a deep connection.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thank you for reading and for your lovely review. Nancy

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

Very nice love poem Nancy. Perfect hexamter, it moves along so smoothly. I like the imgery as well because I can relate with your every word. Good enjambment from stanza 1 to stanza 2!
The rhyme is perfect and the picture lovely. A six in my opinion. xsx Nancy

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Oh, Nancy thank you for this super review and rating. I'm glad you could relate. Nancy

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

What a beautiful love poem. There are so many that yearn for the kind of love you two share. Beautifully written and very heart-warming. Excellent job,

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Nancy

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

You're with me every night when e're the ocean sighs.
But soon you must return, for dreams cannot replace
your love for which I yearn, your tender, warm embrace.

A beautiful love song Nancy. So sweet and demure. Your verses are wonderful and the flow is awesome.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for this lovely review. Nancy

reply by Gungalo on 24-Apr-2014

Smile