Comment from forestport12

Excellent

I can almost see this on screen developing into a chick flick that would have me hiding in the audience wanting to see it. I had no idea such a club existed. As alway you write with depth of understanding but the conditions of the human soul and then put some kind of spin on it we can relate to. Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

What a great review this is, Stan! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your comments. Why can I picture you easily in cognition watching a chick flick? LOL I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from Narvik

Excellent

Well, I see your nurse experience showing here, Karyn. All that healthy talk and all. And I'm I'm glad Roy makes the best of it.

Amusing punch line brought a smile, Shmooz.

Huggles,

Erik

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

If this little bit of silliness gave you a smile, Erik, then I couldn't ask for a better compliment or review. Thank you for taking the time to read, comment, and for the huggles.
Smiles,
Shmoozer : )

Comment from arnie47

Excellent

HILARIOUS! I know just how Roy feels. I love getting good news from my doctor and when I do I always want to get it in writing or record her words when she tells me, "You're in great shape, just keep the pounds down and the blood pressure too." Good job.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks so much for taking the time to read this bit of silliness, Arnie, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind review and always enjoy reading your comments.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

LOL...LOL...LOL...!!

I love this! We all need validation - he does have a point!
Documented proof indeed! Well done on this one for sure.

Cheers
Keep Smilin'... Jax

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks for your great review, Jax, and your wonderful LOLs are the best compliment you can give this little story. Thank you for reading and for your kind comments.
Smiles,
Indy : )

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

my guess is that would not work with my wife. . .maybe yours. . .I seem to have the same issue. . .I seems to be apple shaped. . .

funny piece here

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 Comment Written 23-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014

Thanks for the read and for taking the time to review the story, Petriesan. I don't have a wife cuz I'm a girl, but I wish I had medical confirmation for the people who think I'm a fat head or fat ass. LOL. Thanks for your comments.
Smiles,
Indy : )

reply by Petriesan on 23-Apr-2014

I Know a couple of women who have wives. . .so I never assume anything