On a Day Alive with Promise
rhyming quatrains in 8/7/8/7177 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Brooke, a stunningly beautiful piece in both wording and presentation. Such a gorgeous picture of the landscape and of course the little guy. Most enjoyable, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Brooke, a stunningly beautiful piece in both wording and presentation. Such a gorgeous picture of the landscape and of course the little guy. Most enjoyable, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much for your encouragement and generosity :-) Brooke
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Hello my friend,
Love the mixed meter on this and the greater message woven throughout your cute story. We should all appreciate and even savor what we have. Focusing on what we don't have will make one bitter and unhappy. Terrific metaphor, enjoyed the read immensely.
All the best, Rodger
save your mouse lol
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Hello my friend,
Love the mixed meter on this and the greater message woven throughout your cute story. We should all appreciate and even savor what we have. Focusing on what we don't have will make one bitter and unhappy. Terrific metaphor, enjoyed the read immensely.
All the best, Rodger
save your mouse lol
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Rodger, thank you so much, my generous friend. Sorry there is no reason to use my mouse, as you know how much I like your poetry :-) Brooke
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Thank you, Brooke. I hope I'll be posting soon ... :)
Comment from Joan E.
This photograph gives new meaning to the old expression "Flower Child"! I enjoyed your title and its repeat along with your varied meter and alternating rhymes. Your personification of the "moon" and description of the "dew drops" as a "prize" are quite effective. More hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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This photograph gives new meaning to the old expression "Flower Child"! I enjoyed your title and its repeat along with your varied meter and alternating rhymes. Your personification of the "moon" and description of the "dew drops" as a "prize" are quite effective. More hugs- Joan
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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My precious Sawyer as a flower child - I love it :-) Thank you, my friend :-) Brooke
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I expect you can imagine the smile on my face. :) -J
Comment from Spitfire
I love your poems that celebrate the simple joys in life and engage the imagination we once had as a child. This could be made into a picture book. Dewdrops are so small and easily overlooked.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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I love your poems that celebrate the simple joys in life and engage the imagination we once had as a child. This could be made into a picture book. Dewdrops are so small and easily overlooked.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Spitfire :-) Brooke
Comment from BunnyS
Very nice! The poem is easy to read and follow... very nicely done. I love the picture of Sawyer. You couldn't have chosen a better photo to pair with your beautiful poem. Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Very nice! The poem is easy to read and follow... very nicely done. I love the picture of Sawyer. You couldn't have chosen a better photo to pair with your beautiful poem. Good job!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Bunny :-) Brooke
Comment from donette1914
wow so beautiful and the child adorable and the words where so smooth as butter of this poem. I enjoyed this piece very much outstanding
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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wow so beautiful and the child adorable and the words where so smooth as butter of this poem. I enjoyed this piece very much outstanding
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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donette, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
So very glad I had one six star rating left for the week. This poem is exceptional. I think it makes a beautiful bed time read. Sawyer is so cute.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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So very glad I had one six star rating left for the week. This poem is exceptional. I think it makes a beautiful bed time read. Sawyer is so cute.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Cajungirl, for your generosity, and yes, he is damned cute :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
This is a beautiful poem and what a darling picture of Sawyer. It must be nice to hold the number one spot in ratings. Bravo!
Kat
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Hi Brooke,
This is a beautiful poem and what a darling picture of Sawyer. It must be nice to hold the number one spot in ratings. Bravo!
Kat
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Kat :-) Yes, it is nice. Brooke
Comment from lancellot
You have a remarkable way taking and seeing the small everyday things that so many of us take for granted and spinning them into a masterful story written perfect poetic form. Masterful.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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You have a remarkable way taking and seeing the small everyday things that so many of us take for granted and spinning them into a masterful story written perfect poetic form. Masterful.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
On a day alive with promise, a lovely picture of little Sawyer.that's a beautiful expressed poem Brooke, nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it. God bless uyou. Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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On a day alive with promise, a lovely picture of little Sawyer.that's a beautiful expressed poem Brooke, nice rhyming.I enjoyed reading it. God bless uyou. Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Lakeport, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem. Brooke :-)
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your welcome Brooke. Hugs!lakepot.
