On a Day Alive with Promise
rhyming quatrains in 8/7/8/7177 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
Night person or morning person, lunar beams or dew pearls ...night may reign for a while, but morning has its own glories , dew on the vine that catches sunlight. And slakes thirst. And I managed to add your name in this review.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Night person or morning person, lunar beams or dew pearls ...night may reign for a while, but morning has its own glories , dew on the vine that catches sunlight. And slakes thirst. And I managed to add your name in this review.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
A beutifully written poem with all of the ingredients of nature's finest offerings. Perfectly rhymeed and a perfect form. A pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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A beutifully written poem with all of the ingredients of nature's finest offerings. Perfectly rhymeed and a perfect form. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Pete, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
This poem is truly enchanting almost as much as Sawyer
smelling the morning glory. Love your style and imagination
creating such wonderful story. Pili
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This poem is truly enchanting almost as much as Sawyer
smelling the morning glory. Love your style and imagination
creating such wonderful story. Pili
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You very welcome. Pili
Comment from L.A.Matthies
I read your work for the pure joy it brings, and I always feel that I may learn a little something in the process ...thank you, Brooke. :)Linda
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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I read your work for the pure joy it brings, and I always feel that I may learn a little something in the process ...thank you, Brooke. :)Linda
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Linda, thank you so very much. You are most gracious. Brooke :-)
Comment from Karen B.
Beautiful rhyme and rhythm, along with a sweet reminder that while we may not find exactly what we're looking for, each day is filled with treasures to be explored and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Beautiful rhyme and rhythm, along with a sweet reminder that while we may not find exactly what we're looking for, each day is filled with treasures to be explored and enjoyed.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Karen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Dear Brooke, thank you for pointing out the fact that each facet of a day has its own treasures and rewards. It does not matter if you treasure the warm rays of the sun, the joys of God's creative force in the way that flowers and trees; Butterflys and frogs frolic while at play. Or maybe your delight is found in the delicate calmness of a still and moonlit night. No matter which you desire, it is all good and to be desired and enjoyed.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Dear Brooke, thank you for pointing out the fact that each facet of a day has its own treasures and rewards. It does not matter if you treasure the warm rays of the sun, the joys of God's creative force in the way that flowers and trees; Butterflys and frogs frolic while at play. Or maybe your delight is found in the delicate calmness of a still and moonlit night. No matter which you desire, it is all good and to be desired and enjoyed.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, nomi :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
When tonight the dark's descending,
I will see the moon arise,
but for now while she is sleeping
I have dew drops as my prize.
Adorable....Brooke. Your poetry is just exquisite ..and it captures innocence so well
God bless
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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When tonight the dark's descending,
I will see the moon arise,
but for now while she is sleeping
I have dew drops as my prize.
Adorable....Brooke. Your poetry is just exquisite ..and it captures innocence so well
God bless
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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kiwijenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
This is a delightful little poem, you have managed to pluck " something out of nothing " this is beautifully composed, an inspired example of what poetry is all about, a fertile creative imagination! Well done, Brooke! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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This is a delightful little poem, you have managed to pluck " something out of nothing " this is beautifully composed, an inspired example of what poetry is all about, a fertile creative imagination! Well done, Brooke! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Cedar
This is great. I really enjoyed the rhythm with this one, this actually could be sung and sound like a regular song. The rhyming and flow are both fantastic. Take care. Bill
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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This is great. I really enjoyed the rhythm with this one, this actually could be sung and sound like a regular song. The rhyming and flow are both fantastic. Take care. Bill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Bill, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke, again you masterfully written another beautiful piece of poetry. Technically your iambic and anapestic Type of rhythm and flow smoothly throughout your poem was neither force, labored or strained which made the rhythm flow even smoother. A pleasant and very creative poem that had a dreamlike feel to it where the essence of the poem Was inspirational and stimulating to the senses. Thank you so much for sharing this posting this for others and may the Lord be with you and yours always.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Brooke, again you masterfully written another beautiful piece of poetry. Technically your iambic and anapestic Type of rhythm and flow smoothly throughout your poem was neither force, labored or strained which made the rhythm flow even smoother. A pleasant and very creative poem that had a dreamlike feel to it where the essence of the poem Was inspirational and stimulating to the senses. Thank you so much for sharing this posting this for others and may the Lord be with you and yours always.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2014
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Alex, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke
