Fear Burns
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Comment from honeytree
Excellent art work and words.
We can dream and some of our dreams don't come true.
We can still dance and feel happy
Each and every day being happy.
honey tree
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Excellent art work and words.
We can dream and some of our dreams don't come true.
We can still dance and feel happy
Each and every day being happy.
honey tree
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from RYME4U
This free verse poem is well done. It starts on a happy note and progresses to a sad result. The repetition of the first line at the end emphasizes the point you are making.
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This free verse poem is well done. It starts on a happy note and progresses to a sad result. The repetition of the first line at the end emphasizes the point you are making.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I thought this was a really nice poem, it had great wording and it also had some nice alliteration, with comfort claimed being my favourite, good work,
Andrew,
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I thought this was a really nice poem, it had great wording and it also had some nice alliteration, with comfort claimed being my favourite, good work,
Andrew,
Comment Written 22-Apr-2014
