Turning The Write
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Comment from honeytree
We walk within our lives living our lives
That has been happening for a long time
Since life on earth has begun.
Humans have taken a long time to truly start
to help others.
honey tree
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We walk within our lives living our lives
That has been happening for a long time
Since life on earth has begun.
Humans have taken a long time to truly start
to help others.
honey tree
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
Comment from NicciFaye
All of the many views of Easter and still God sees us in one view. As we look up to wonder...he looks down and already knows...we are still sinners, love by his Son who sacificed it all for unworthy clay. Thank you for sharing this expectional write.
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All of the many views of Easter and still God sees us in one view. As we look up to wonder...he looks down and already knows...we are still sinners, love by his Son who sacificed it all for unworthy clay. Thank you for sharing this expectional write.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Walter - your poem exudes that deeper knowing of faith, the journey then and now still holds much the same blood and pain. Strong images, nice story poem with a build up in your message. Overall well penned and I liked your closing bringing us back into the present knowing - suffering pain still exists.
Great job my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Dear Walter - your poem exudes that deeper knowing of faith, the journey then and now still holds much the same blood and pain. Strong images, nice story poem with a build up in your message. Overall well penned and I liked your closing bringing us back into the present knowing - suffering pain still exists.
Great job my friend.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
