my mother
pillar of strength ,bubbly and vivacious .3 total reviews
Comment from DDLacy
Aw I love it! There is nothing like our Mothers! We spawn from them and mother's make up every element of love, true love. A mother will always be there for her children unconditionally so cherish and appreciate her because she'll will only be with us for a short while. Thanks for the share and may God bless!.
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Aw I love it! There is nothing like our Mothers! We spawn from them and mother's make up every element of love, true love. A mother will always be there for her children unconditionally so cherish and appreciate her because she'll will only be with us for a short while. Thanks for the share and may God bless!.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
Comment from Lysa Schuler
This was an excellent write. However, the end evades me for I don't know what ephemeral means, which you have misspelled as ephimeral. Other than this. The poem was very inspiring. You have a blessed Easter.
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This was an excellent write. However, the end evades me for I don't know what ephemeral means, which you have misspelled as ephimeral. Other than this. The poem was very inspiring. You have a blessed Easter.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Do read the contest rules. a 5-7-5 poem is one that has three lines
the first line has 5 syllables
The second line has 7 syllables
the third line has 5 syllables
u are part of me.-----------------5
as much as (iam)I'm part of you.---------7
rest everything is ephimeral and shallow. ---12 should be 5.
When you make changes I will be willing to regrade
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Do read the contest rules. a 5-7-5 poem is one that has three lines
the first line has 5 syllables
The second line has 7 syllables
the third line has 5 syllables
u are part of me.-----------------5
as much as (iam)I'm part of you.---------7
rest everything is ephimeral and shallow. ---12 should be 5.
When you make changes I will be willing to regrade
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
