Each Blade of Grass
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6168 total reviews
Comment from Hatch1515
It has been awhile since I've seen what you have written, and for that I apologize. Nevertheless, your work is always beautiful and it's some of the best work I've read. This poem is just as wonderful as all your other pieces. All I can say is how great it was and I'll leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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It has been awhile since I've seen what you have written, and for that I apologize. Nevertheless, your work is always beautiful and it's some of the best work I've read. This poem is just as wonderful as all your other pieces. All I can say is how great it was and I'll leave it at that. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Hatch, how good to hear from you. Thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from donaldcolson
Lovely seasonal poem which is beautifully written with a good photo for illustration. I can't pick out a stanza as favorite they all seem so good. However I miss some metaphorical significance to make it perfect. don
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Lovely seasonal poem which is beautifully written with a good photo for illustration. I can't pick out a stanza as favorite they all seem so good. However I miss some metaphorical significance to make it perfect. don
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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don, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
I love all the colors in the Crayola box. I remember having only the basic eight colors. Lovely rhyme and good use of alliteration with rambler rosé, come -congregate and prettify - preen. Fun to read aloud.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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I love all the colors in the Crayola box. I remember having only the basic eight colors. Lovely rhyme and good use of alliteration with rambler rosé, come -congregate and prettify - preen. Fun to read aloud.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Janet, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Treischel
A color crayon poem with those lovely colors craftily used. Love that prettify and preen line. A lovely springtime delight. It flow smoothly on abcb lined verse.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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A color crayon poem with those lovely colors craftily used. Love that prettify and preen line. A lovely springtime delight. It flow smoothly on abcb lined verse.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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thank you so much, Treischel :-) Brooke
Comment from Deborah Marie
Nothing like a wonderful photo used creatively with many, many colors in your well penned poem. Learning new colors is a wonderful thing for a young child to learn. Just love the way you used them here. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Nothing like a wonderful photo used creatively with many, many colors in your well penned poem. Learning new colors is a wonderful thing for a young child to learn. Just love the way you used them here. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Deb, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for the pleasure of another of your wonderful poems that help us relish in the little things so very important to us all. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Thanks for the pleasure of another of your wonderful poems that help us relish in the little things so very important to us all. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2014
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Ric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Love this colorful poem and presentation, and the Easter theme is timely and upbeat. Periwinkle and magenta are colors most little boys (and certainly most grown men) would not know without help. I would still love to have a box of Crayolas with enough colors to include the fancy ones. My sister and I used to re-name some of them to suit ourseles, like "pretty red" and "pretty blue." Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Love this colorful poem and presentation, and the Easter theme is timely and upbeat. Periwinkle and magenta are colors most little boys (and certainly most grown men) would not know without help. I would still love to have a box of Crayolas with enough colors to include the fancy ones. My sister and I used to re-name some of them to suit ourseles, like "pretty red" and "pretty blue." Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Jeanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Onixxiya
Periwinkle is one of my most favorite words, and show them off you have. Whenever I see your name attached to a post I know I am going to smile, I do so even before I read in sheer anticipation of the uplift. The idea of grass striving to reach a goal, and roses "pretifying" (awesome word) is great too. Has me in mind of the talking flowers in Alice in Wonderland. I love it.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Periwinkle is one of my most favorite words, and show them off you have. Whenever I see your name attached to a post I know I am going to smile, I do so even before I read in sheer anticipation of the uplift. The idea of grass striving to reach a goal, and roses "pretifying" (awesome word) is great too. Has me in mind of the talking flowers in Alice in Wonderland. I love it.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Onixxiya :_) Brooke
Comment from Charlene0513
To adewpearl,
A wonderful way for your grandson to learn the colors by trying to color and remember all the different flowers that are in your (God's) garden.
Charlene
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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To adewpearl,
A wonderful way for your grandson to learn the colors by trying to color and remember all the different flowers that are in your (God's) garden.
Charlene
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Charlene, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jay Squires
A delightful Easter poem, Brooke. You develop from the small (single blade of grass) to "each" rose to all the flowers that act as a backdrop to the "new Easter clothes." Great job!
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A delightful Easter poem, Brooke. You develop from the small (single blade of grass) to "each" rose to all the flowers that act as a backdrop to the "new Easter clothes." Great job!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2014
