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Each Blade of Grass

rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6

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Comment from jadapenn
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I guess you're all pretty excited that at last spring seems to be in the air. What a lovely feeling and what a gorgeous poem to herald spring. I hope she lasts sometime and gives you great joy. Well penned and illustrated, Brooke. luv jada

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Thank you, Jada, and yes, it is wonderful to be rid of the horrid winter :-) Brooke
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Brooke,
glad to see magenta get in for a wrap and a periwinkle sky, well I'm not sure of that colour, only the shell it resides in... but I am a bit of a turtle when it comes to a lot of things. No matter your poem is as always, beautiful in flow with perfect meter and rhyme and has a real lightness about it that is an easy read to appreciate... always a true pleasure.

With our thoughts we create,
coloured dreams,
James xx

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    James, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rouskin
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The flowers come to congregate
and strike their brightest pose,
as they show off the finery
of brand new Easter clothes

Perfect as always Happy Easter

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    rouskin, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your generosity and hope you had a lovely Easter :-) Brooke
Comment from GracieAnn
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Brooke, they have so many more colors than we ever did! LOL I enjoyed the rhyme and meter, along with the g, r, c, alliteration. Very fun. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    GracieAnn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amada
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Someone is being hooked on crayons as well. Really, as a passage to wonderland. This quatrain is delightful, a treasure to read to kids, and to us as well.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Njorgensen
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Beautiful.
It's easily confirmed the inspiration of this poem. You have a unique eye for beauty and it all flows nicely on your page. I love it.

Njorgensen

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Mjorgensen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Irish Rain
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Beautiful poem, lovely picture! I love anything with colors, and this gem is exploding with them! Like how you compare the flowers colorful blooms to Easter clothes! Blessings tonight!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Justjo, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bill Schott
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I like that this poem, albeit a lovely poem in general, is utilitarian in that it reinforces, in a gentle, natural way, the learning process. Nice.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Thank you, Bill, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
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This is a beautiful and insightful write for Sawyer's book. He looks mighty cute in his Easter Bunny suit. With your talents and skill, I am convinced that you could write a master piece of poetry on any subject. I enjoy them so much. Many thanks for sharing. Bob

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Bob, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Selina Stambi
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behaves as if her life exists
to prettify and preen. .. sounds like my second daughter! Love .. prettify and preen - such a pretty prhase.

We're just thawing out - how blessed you are, Brooke to have had an Easter garden.

Have a lovely week,

Love,

xxx

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2014
    Thank you so much, Sonali :-) Brooke