Each Blade of Grass
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6168 total reviews
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an absolutely lovely picture and this poem that the author has created with this piece of writing adds to this to complete this experience. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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This is an absolutely lovely picture and this poem that the author has created with this piece of writing adds to this to complete this experience. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Tomes, thank you so much for your generous review :-) Brooke
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My pleasure
Comment from comanalbert
We learned them too with a great delight. I have a sweet tooth for this type of words, but I never thought of mixing taste with color, a great idea.I was so far more of a Proust fan, with color mixed with feelings...Splendid poem!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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We learned them too with a great delight. I have a sweet tooth for this type of words, but I never thought of mixing taste with color, a great idea.I was so far more of a Proust fan, with color mixed with feelings...Splendid poem!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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comanalbert, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent internal rhyme of 'rose/grows', Brooke, and top alliteration in 'to prettify and preen'.
Top multi-syllable, though not too fancy words, add to the flow of this already perfectly metered and rhymed poem.
Uplifting and most enjoyable topical post.
Happy Easter, Ted
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Excellent internal rhyme of 'rose/grows', Brooke, and top alliteration in 'to prettify and preen'.
Top multi-syllable, though not too fancy words, add to the flow of this already perfectly metered and rhymed poem.
Uplifting and most enjoyable topical post.
Happy Easter, Ted
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Ray, Happy Easter :-) Thank you for your lovely review, my friend. Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I know it is not the way to describe a poem, Brooke, but it is PRETTY. I like the way you have used these names to clarify the colours, while at the same time writing this lovely poem. I am sure it will help Sawyer and any child who is lucky enough to read this. Your choice of illustration, could not be bettered. Lovely. :) Sandra. Hope you are enjoying what is left of Easter! xsx
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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I know it is not the way to describe a poem, Brooke, but it is PRETTY. I like the way you have used these names to clarify the colours, while at the same time writing this lovely poem. I am sure it will help Sawyer and any child who is lucky enough to read this. Your choice of illustration, could not be bettered. Lovely. :) Sandra. Hope you are enjoying what is left of Easter! xsx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Sandra, Happy Easter, and thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. I will settle for "pretty" any day :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi...
~ The artwork and poem work together to make an exceptional piece... Leaves the reader with an uplifting and fresh feeling...
~ Glad I ran across this one...
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Hi...
~ The artwork and poem work together to make an exceptional piece... Leaves the reader with an uplifting and fresh feeling...
~ Glad I ran across this one...
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Jax, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from hari anand
Beautiful personification of flowers showing their Easter clothes, green blade s of grass whats to touch sky of fame. Loved it.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Beautiful personification of flowers showing their Easter clothes, green blade s of grass whats to touch sky of fame. Loved it.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Hargunanand, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from akulkumol
This is a beautiful poem. It is lyrical and mental
images of a beautiful garden full of lovely flowers.
I love the stanza most
The flowers come to congregate
and strike their brightest pose,
as they show off the finery
of brand new Easter clothes.
Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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This is a beautiful poem. It is lyrical and mental
images of a beautiful garden full of lovely flowers.
I love the stanza most
The flowers come to congregate
and strike their brightest pose,
as they show off the finery
of brand new Easter clothes.
Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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akulkumol, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jackarrie
a wonderful poem of the beauty we find in nature, the image of the beautiful flowers is a magical pic. I thought I could see Sawyers little head lurking behind them.
The flowers come to congregate
and strike their brightest pose,
as they show off the finery
of brand new Easter clothes.
Well done. Mary
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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a wonderful poem of the beauty we find in nature, the image of the beautiful flowers is a magical pic. I thought I could see Sawyers little head lurking behind them.
The flowers come to congregate
and strike their brightest pose,
as they show off the finery
of brand new Easter clothes.
Well done. Mary
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, Brooke, this was lovely, and just in time for Easter. Very much liked your metaphor or a "periwinkle sky." The picture you've chosen filled my heart with joy - how I' love to live in that garden some day, with just beauty surrounding me and no pain.
Excellent spring visuals.
Happy Easter, love, Y.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Oh, Brooke, this was lovely, and just in time for Easter. Very much liked your metaphor or a "periwinkle sky." The picture you've chosen filled my heart with joy - how I' love to live in that garden some day, with just beauty surrounding me and no pain.
Excellent spring visuals.
Happy Easter, love, Y.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Yelena, happy Easter!! And thank you for your lovely review :-) Brooke
Comment from Willowsong
This is the perfect poem to celebrate this holiday with. Wonderful imagery and such a creative way to use some interesting color names. The presentation is lovely.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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This is the perfect poem to celebrate this holiday with. Wonderful imagery and such a creative way to use some interesting color names. The presentation is lovely.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Willowsong, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome :)
