Each Blade of Grass
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6168 total reviews
Comment from Lysa Schuler
i love this piece very much. It gave great visuals and it read well. A perfect poem for this holiday. I found this very enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing, and many blessings this Easter.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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i love this piece very much. It gave great visuals and it read well. A perfect poem for this holiday. I found this very enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing, and many blessings this Easter.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Lysa, thank you so much :-) Happy Easter! Brooke
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You're so very welcome, and thank you for sharing. Happy Easter to you too, and many blessings.
Comment from alexgeorge
What a beautiful bunny, Sawyer portrays in the profile pic!
Lovely poem of easter spring and a festive season, a time of rebirth, renewal, creativity.
God bless us all.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful bunny, Sawyer portrays in the profile pic!
Lovely poem of easter spring and a festive season, a time of rebirth, renewal, creativity.
God bless us all.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Alex, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Debra White
Hi Brooke :) I always liked the crayon colour name 'burnt sienna'. I loved your poem, the grass in your first stanza sound much like the wild area at the bottom of our garden! No magenta roses to be found there, but gazillions of dandelions! Nice use of alliteration in your second stanza and as always your rhyme and meter are flawless. A very enjoyable read :) hope your having a lovely Easter. Kindest regards, Debra :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Hi Brooke :) I always liked the crayon colour name 'burnt sienna'. I loved your poem, the grass in your first stanza sound much like the wild area at the bottom of our garden! No magenta roses to be found there, but gazillions of dandelions! Nice use of alliteration in your second stanza and as always your rhyme and meter are flawless. A very enjoyable read :) hope your having a lovely Easter. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Debra, Happy Easter and thank you :-) I always loved burnt sienna too :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Brooke,
What a lovely springtime poem to find in my box today:) I especially loved the beautiful imagery and strong word choices in the last stanza. Have a great day and Happy Easter:) Great job--Ted
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Dear Brooke,
What a lovely springtime poem to find in my box today:) I especially loved the beautiful imagery and strong word choices in the last stanza. Have a great day and Happy Easter:) Great job--Ted
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much, Ted :-) Happy Easter! Brooke
Comment from seren james
Good on Sawyer for teaching Grandma the colours. This poem is wonderful. It is such a fresh poem so apt for this Easter season. The colours of the flowers are so well shown in the poem. The poem is full of imagery to behold.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Good on Sawyer for teaching Grandma the colours. This poem is wonderful. It is such a fresh poem so apt for this Easter season. The colours of the flowers are so well shown in the poem. The poem is full of imagery to behold.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much, Seren. When he says periwinkle my heart melts :-) Brooke
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I know the feeling Brooke. I have a 3yr old. The way he builds up words and language fascinates me. I record our conversations and he loves to listen to them over and over again. "whobody is picking me up today from nursery?".....he askes...
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whobody - I love it :-)
Comment from acerisestory
I very much enjoyed your poem and it's comparison to Easter finery. Is your rhyming scheme called bd? I haven't used it myself since I'm fairly new to writing poetry and to FanStory. I'll have to five it a try. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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I very much enjoyed your poem and it's comparison to Easter finery. Is your rhyming scheme called bd? I haven't used it myself since I'm fairly new to writing poetry and to FanStory. I'll have to five it a try. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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This is abcb rhyming :-) Thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Benny Beeharry
There is more beauty on this earth than the eyes can see.the flowers are a testimony to this, whatever the season.
Well said. Beautiful writing.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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There is more beauty on this earth than the eyes can see.the flowers are a testimony to this, whatever the season.
Well said. Beautiful writing.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Benny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Enrique28
Your little Easter gem flows beautifully with fine poetic tones, and its most significant image of nature's renewal is very nicely depicted and superbly presented.
Great stuff! Enrique
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Your little Easter gem flows beautifully with fine poetic tones, and its most significant image of nature's renewal is very nicely depicted and superbly presented.
Great stuff! Enrique
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Enrique, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
What a lovely Easter poem this is, Brooke!
Bright and cheery with excellent rhyme and flow. You have painted a glorious garden picture for your readers! I especially liked "magenta rambler rose". :)
Happy Easter!
Connie
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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What a lovely Easter poem this is, Brooke!
Bright and cheery with excellent rhyme and flow. You have painted a glorious garden picture for your readers! I especially liked "magenta rambler rose". :)
Happy Easter!
Connie
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Connie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Sawyer is growing up fast and learning fast. This is a lovely poem for Easter. Good alliteration with prettify and preen. That was a big box of crayons to have those colors in it. Lovely picture choice. I am anxious for my pots and window box to be over flowing with flowers like those! Happy Easter. Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Sawyer is growing up fast and learning fast. This is a lovely poem for Easter. Good alliteration with prettify and preen. That was a big box of crayons to have those colors in it. Lovely picture choice. I am anxious for my pots and window box to be over flowing with flowers like those! Happy Easter. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) I loved my 64 count box of Crayolas when I was a kid - it's a family tradition. Brooke
