Hope for a Dance
Reserving a date to go dancing with my sweetheart2 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
You have chained a group of 5-7-5 poems to make one that has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
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You have chained a group of 5-7-5 poems to make one that has a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh, for God's sake take her to the Country Dance! LOL, a cleverly written poem of yearning, perhaps revealing a touch of neglect and, most assuredly, with the last line: "Sad for me, you'll see." I think he'd better listen!
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Oh, for God's sake take her to the Country Dance! LOL, a cleverly written poem of yearning, perhaps revealing a touch of neglect and, most assuredly, with the last line: "Sad for me, you'll see." I think he'd better listen!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
