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Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Melancholy Mary Melon"These are fictional character sketches.
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Comment from skesling
Like the way this poem tells a story that has a true ring to it. Can't say I would change anything or try to make it any better than it is.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Like the way this poem tells a story that has a true ring to it. Can't say I would change anything or try to make it any better than it is.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from Jay Squires
A cleverly written poem, Bill. She'd have been better off with the overcrowding of prisons allowing felons release, to have taken the chance with the three-strikes law.
I loved it!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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A cleverly written poem, Bill. She'd have been better off with the overcrowding of prisons allowing felons release, to have taken the chance with the three-strikes law.
I loved it!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Jay, for the excellent review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, good ol' Mary Melon. Well you know what they say? You live by the sword, and you die by the sword, but apparently, Mary had never heard that before. She'll have plenty of time to read philosophy in the pen, I should think.
This was very funny, Bill, and well rhymed, too!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Hah, good ol' Mary Melon. Well you know what they say? You live by the sword, and you die by the sword, but apparently, Mary had never heard that before. She'll have plenty of time to read philosophy in the pen, I should think.
This was very funny, Bill, and well rhymed, too!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Dean, for the excellent review and kind words.
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You're welcome, Bill.
