NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Playing Up Easter"30 Days of Poetry
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Comment from krys123
Sunni, When I read this poem may gave me joy and an elation and also it gave me jubilant and satisfaction as though I was the bunny finding the carrot. Thank you so much for sharing this Sunni with everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
Sunni, When I read this poem may gave me joy and an elation and also it gave me jubilant and satisfaction as though I was the bunny finding the carrot. Thank you so much for sharing this Sunni with everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Peace be with you too. Happy Easter :)
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Sunni, you are so sincerely welcome and Happy Easter to you also.
Comment from 1954speed
Imagine, indeed! Easter is a wonderful time for this. Where are the eggs? What's in the basket? And what is the theme for this day? Simple poem I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
Imagine, indeed! Easter is a wonderful time for this. Where are the eggs? What's in the basket? And what is the theme for this day? Simple poem I enjoyed.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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I should write more... thank you.
Have a wonderful Easter Weekend :)
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your jolly Easter greeting this haiku triplet. I especially liked your alliteration of "b's". I'll have to figure out a substitute for wheat in the Bird's Nest cookies. Hope the Easter Bunny brings you special treats! -Joan
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
Thank you for your jolly Easter greeting this haiku triplet. I especially liked your alliteration of "b's". I'll have to figure out a substitute for wheat in the Bird's Nest cookies. Hope the Easter Bunny brings you special treats! -Joan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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You'll find something.... Gluten-free pasta, boiled and baked. Thank you.
Have a Good Friday. And wonderful Easter too :)
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Good idea about the pasta--you're so creative! Have a pleasant Friday night- Joan
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"Playing up Easter" is an excellent haiku suite in three verses with 14,12,and 17 syllables respectively. It has good imagery but is a little weak on implied meaning of each verse.
Preston
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
Hi, Sunni,
"Playing up Easter" is an excellent haiku suite in three verses with 14,12,and 17 syllables respectively. It has good imagery but is a little weak on implied meaning of each verse.
Preston
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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No hidden meanings... just landscape. Thank you.
Happy Good Friday. Peace :)
Comment from Glasstruth
The bunny here seems so innocent as it enjoys life, "bunny plays with the bee." I'm sure its unaware of what a bee sting might feel like. Yet, this is so giddily written. Happy Ester. Les
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
The bunny here seems so innocent as it enjoys life, "bunny plays with the bee." I'm sure its unaware of what a bee sting might feel like. Yet, this is so giddily written. Happy Ester. Les
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Enjoy Good Friday into a wonderful Easter Weekend :)
Comment from royowen
A sweet little poem written about a bee and a bunny, I guess you could say it was a bunny bee instead of the bee producing honey, you could say that the bee produced boney. Well done, Alicia, Roy.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
A sweet little poem written about a bee and a bunny, I guess you could say it was a bunny bee instead of the bee producing honey, you could say that the bee produced boney. Well done, Alicia, Roy.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I put an Easter recipe on the page. You're funny. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend. Happy Easter :)
Comment from kiwijenny
I like the Na PoWri Mo....although I do t know anything about it. Do you get a prompt a day? This poem was cute.................bee nests ...giddily
Well done...................................
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
I like the Na PoWri Mo....although I do t know anything about it. Do you get a prompt a day? This poem was cute.................bee nests ...giddily
Well done...................................
God bless
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Hi Jenny... I go to the website http://www.napowrimo.net/ every day to find out what the optional prompt is.... Sometimes I write it. Sometimes, I try to write it. Other days, I just wing my own poem.
Thank you.
Have a wonderful weekend. Happy Easter!
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Thanks