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NaPoWriMo 2014

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30 Days of Poetry

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Comment from krys123
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Sunni, When I read this poem may gave me joy and an elation and also it gave me jubilant and satisfaction as though I was the bunny finding the carrot. Thank you so much for sharing this Sunni with everyone and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you
    Peace be with you too. Happy Easter :)
reply by krys123 on 18-Apr-2014
    Sunni, you are so sincerely welcome and Happy Easter to you also.
Comment from 1954speed
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Imagine, indeed! Easter is a wonderful time for this. Where are the eggs? What's in the basket? And what is the theme for this day? Simple poem I enjoyed.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    I should write more... thank you.
    Have a wonderful Easter Weekend :)
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you for your jolly Easter greeting this haiku triplet. I especially liked your alliteration of "b's". I'll have to figure out a substitute for wheat in the Bird's Nest cookies. Hope the Easter Bunny brings you special treats! -Joan

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    You'll find something.... Gluten-free pasta, boiled and baked. Thank you.

    Have a Good Friday. And wonderful Easter too :)
reply by Joan E. on 18-Apr-2014
    Good idea about the pasta--you're so creative! Have a pleasant Friday night- Joan
Comment from Preston McWhorter
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Hi, Sunni,
"Playing up Easter" is an excellent haiku suite in three verses with 14,12,and 17 syllables respectively. It has good imagery but is a little weak on implied meaning of each verse.
Preston

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    No hidden meanings... just landscape. Thank you.
    Happy Good Friday. Peace :)
Comment from Glasstruth
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The bunny here seems so innocent as it enjoys life, "bunny plays with the bee." I'm sure its unaware of what a bee sting might feel like. Yet, this is so giddily written. Happy Ester. Les

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2014
    Thank you
    Enjoy Good Friday into a wonderful Easter Weekend :)
Comment from royowen
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A sweet little poem written about a bee and a bunny, I guess you could say it was a bunny bee instead of the bee producing honey, you could say that the bee produced boney. Well done, Alicia, Roy.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
    I put an Easter recipe on the page. You're funny. Thank you. Have a wonderful weekend. Happy Easter :)
Comment from kiwijenny
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I like the Na PoWri Mo....although I do t know anything about it. Do you get a prompt a day? This poem was cute.................bee nests ...giddily
Well done...................................
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
    Hi Jenny... I go to the website http://www.napowrimo.net/ every day to find out what the optional prompt is.... Sometimes I write it. Sometimes, I try to write it. Other days, I just wing my own poem.

    Thank you.
    Have a wonderful weekend. Happy Easter!
reply by kiwijenny on 18-Apr-2014
    Thanks