Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

What wonderful words to go with that lovely photo. The all knowing all loving eye of the Lord. I really enjoyed
this poem, perfect. xsx sandra

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

Thank you so much:)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the way you glorify the name of The Lord, in this wonderful acknowledgement of beautiful creation! I love the way the sun breaks through the clouds and seems to be like an eye shining down! Just another communication from God, great little poem, Teresa. Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

thank you Roy:)

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

I've often been struck by this same vision TAB - sun & clouds tend to do that sort of thing in rather a spectacular way, hmm? One spag note:
the light shining through the center
of the accumulating clouds
create(s) an eye
(The subject of the verb is 'light', not clouds, yes??)

:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

THanks for the spag suggestion and for the great review:)

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You create such a peaceful feeling in your verse. Knowing that the eye of the Lord watches over all creation is reassuring. The artwork you selected supports and compliments that message.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Lothlorien

Excellent

I think this is a great poem, it does a great job of using descriptions to help create a vivid picture in the readers mind. I really enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014

Thanks so much:)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

God free verse. I agree the eye of the Lord is wat aching every thing we do and hurting too when we do things that displease Him
Awesome presentation

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thanks so much;)

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And wherever there is light, there will always be faith. A lovely image which works well with the sentiment. A lovely delivery. Your passion in Christ shines through.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thanks RG:)

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Teresa, this is a creative, refreshing and honestly relieving look at the "all seeing eye", unlike other groups of persuasion that are anything but Christian. Clever capture of a cloud formation put into words. Well done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thanks so much GracieAnn:)

Comment from Willowsong

Excellent

This was a beautiful depiction of the image you witnessed. I've never seen an event such as this but I can image it was awe-inspiring. I always enjoy watching the sun's rays beam down through the clouds but this is truly amazing!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

Thanks so much:)

reply by Willowsong on 19-Apr-2014

You're welcome :)

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

This struck a chord! I was driving home at sunset the other day. The sun was huge and of such an intense colour as it paused on the surface of the sea to shake out its flowing mantle of blazing silks. One can easily imagine why the ancients worshipped such a glorious icon. Surely it is one of God's finest gifts.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014

The sunsets are a wonderful gift from God. Thanks for the review.