Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Bedtime"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
3 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Extra-good chapter, Snod. Interesting the effects the fairy-folk had on Oz. The interchange between the cab driver and Ess was priceless. I laughed out loud in these two places:
"Your dad, eh? Bloody good job you got your looks from your mum then."
"Yeah, all right, but I mean it about him puking. The first sign and you're both in the gutter."
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Extra-good chapter, Snod. Interesting the effects the fairy-folk had on Oz. The interchange between the cab driver and Ess was priceless. I laughed out loud in these two places:
"Your dad, eh? Bloody good job you got your looks from your mum then."
"Yeah, all right, but I mean it about him puking. The first sign and you're both in the gutter."
Comment Written 20-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2014
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Thanks, glad you liked it. The fairies of old were known for putting people to sleep and enchanting them. That's where we get the term 'stroke' from. OK it's just occurred to me that Oz is going to have to explain that, should he ever wake up.
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You mean "stroke" as in a cerebrovascular medical problem? I wouldn't mind the sleep/enchantment treatment, but I'll pass on the "stroke". Poor Oz.
Comment from joneau2
Ha, an interesting and entertaining chapter. Very well written. The dialogue is perfect ... quick read, the mark of an accomplished author. One minor detail - correct the spelling of the word "for" in your Author's Notes section.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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Ha, an interesting and entertaining chapter. Very well written. The dialogue is perfect ... quick read, the mark of an accomplished author. One minor detail - correct the spelling of the word "for" in your Author's Notes section.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2014
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from Adri7enne
Poor Ess. Oz is a hand full when he's lucid, but carrying him around sounds like a monumental task.
I loved your cabbie's attitude. It actually reminds me of the real London cabbies. LOL!
I'm just reading for sheer pleasure, and to learn how you do it so well. I loved it, snod. Now wake him up. I enjoy his rough humor.
Have a nice holiday and a Happy Easter!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Poor Ess. Oz is a hand full when he's lucid, but carrying him around sounds like a monumental task.
I loved your cabbie's attitude. It actually reminds me of the real London cabbies. LOL!
I'm just reading for sheer pleasure, and to learn how you do it so well. I loved it, snod. Now wake him up. I enjoy his rough humor.
Have a nice holiday and a Happy Easter!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks. Yes, he can't sleep too long. Ess has her swanky party to go to
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That's right. And she hasn't even bought a dress yet, has she?
Comment from comanalbert
Brilliant description of the whole "pilgrimage" she makes carrying Oz like a cross. You have a keen eye for details and that pays off really well in the whole image of the story. Great chapter!
Chauff still comatose?
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Brilliant description of the whole "pilgrimage" she makes carrying Oz like a cross. You have a keen eye for details and that pays off really well in the whole image of the story. Great chapter!
Chauff still comatose?
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Thanks. I hadn't thought of the religious imagery. I'm not sure Es would approve.
