Vain
Vanity is insane.....63 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello nassus1957, Your poem speaks volumes and brings humor to the glamour and vanity of women of all ages ... even the 20-something women. Great artwork choice and message of caution. A gentle reminder of what can go wrong. Great imagery. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Hello nassus1957, Your poem speaks volumes and brings humor to the glamour and vanity of women of all ages ... even the 20-something women. Great artwork choice and message of caution. A gentle reminder of what can go wrong. Great imagery. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks LateBloomer, I will keep the blue waters flowing, for reviewers like you, do inspire writers to do better.
Comment from joeakeefe
The search for means by which the "beauty" of youth can be has been going on for centuries:
See the ancients' efforts or the exploration of Ponce de Leon and his search for the fountain of youth in what is now Florida.
In square footage alone, the cosmetic department of large stores such as Macys or Nordstroms dwarfs many others. And the billions of dollars we spend each year in this "search" could feed the third world.
But, realistically, our society demands that popular figures particularly our women seek that "golden touch."
Great job in calling the shots on this.
'joeakeefe
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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The search for means by which the "beauty" of youth can be has been going on for centuries:
See the ancients' efforts or the exploration of Ponce de Leon and his search for the fountain of youth in what is now Florida.
In square footage alone, the cosmetic department of large stores such as Macys or Nordstroms dwarfs many others. And the billions of dollars we spend each year in this "search" could feed the third world.
But, realistically, our society demands that popular figures particularly our women seek that "golden touch."
Great job in calling the shots on this.
'joeakeefe
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Well, vanity and feeding on it, is definitely a lucrative business nowadays. Thanks joeakeefe for sharing your insights and for the five stars too.
Comment from ravenblack
It is pretty ridiculous the extent that some go to for beauty, that vanity causes some to inject poison that will eventually Pock and pit the face. Good use of monorhyme.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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It is pretty ridiculous the extent that some go to for beauty, that vanity causes some to inject poison that will eventually Pock and pit the face. Good use of monorhyme.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot ravenblack, that's true, beauty and vanity is a risky business but it is a lucrative entrepreneurial venture. Thanks again for stopping by.
Comment from Angel Debbie
That sounds like something I don't want to try. Great write pin points a great meaning in such few words. It make me wonder how many people in the movies are still totally natural in their appearances.
Thank you for sharing a great write. And also the super Author notes. Makes one think.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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That sounds like something I don't want to try. Great write pin points a great meaning in such few words. It make me wonder how many people in the movies are still totally natural in their appearances.
Thank you for sharing a great write. And also the super Author notes. Makes one think.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks Angel Debbie for considering that this is a great write. Yes, people in the celluloid world are willing to trade pain for artificial youth. Thanks again and God bless.
Comment from krys123
Susan, you definitely made your point quite clear with this picture and your words. Such an astonishing picture to complement your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Susan, you definitely made your point quite clear with this picture and your words. Such an astonishing picture to complement your poem. Thank you so much for sharing and posting your work for others and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I really don't like the shock value of the picture but I can't find a better alternative to drive my point. If I could find something more tempered then I shall click to edit mode, just wait. Thanks again for stopping by. Susan
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Susan, I think the picture was appropriate strong but appropriate. And you are so very welcome.
Alex
Comment from ELumpkins
Must we present poetry with pictures of horror? The short presentation gets less than the credit for this work. Everyone must be hung up with disbelief about the picture. How could a beautiful woman ruin herself by using such a dangerous product?
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Must we present poetry with pictures of horror? The short presentation gets less than the credit for this work. Everyone must be hung up with disbelief about the picture. How could a beautiful woman ruin herself by using such a dangerous product?
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Dear ELumpkins, I too, don't like the shock value of the picture, we are on the same boat. I can't however find a better alternative, but just wait, if ever i could find something more tempered, then I shall click to edit mode. Thanks again, for stopping by.
Comment from Sam Mendonca
I hear about what a mess Botox can do if it isn't done correctly.
You certainly explained it very well in your poem, and the photo-WOW..
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I hear about what a mess Botox can do if it isn't done correctly.
You certainly explained it very well in your poem, and the photo-WOW..
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks Sam, for affirming the message of this poem. I am planning to click on edit mode if ever I could find a more tempered picture to go with this poem. Thanks again, God bless.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have convinced me that I don't really need botox! LOL, rather keep what I've got than end up looking like a golf ball! What a horrible thought, how many women will end up like that? Stupid. Great little poem, saying such a lot! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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You have convinced me that I don't really need botox! LOL, rather keep what I've got than end up looking like a golf ball! What a horrible thought, how many women will end up like that? Stupid. Great little poem, saying such a lot! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot Sandra for affirming the message of this poem. I am planning though to change the picture, once I could find a more tempered alternative to drive my point. God bless.
Comment from Janet Foor
vanity shots
Beverly's hot botox clots
dimpled dots
One hears these horror stories. Yikes! I have earned every wrinkle! Great picture to make your point.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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vanity shots
Beverly's hot botox clots
dimpled dots
One hears these horror stories. Yikes! I have earned every wrinkle! Great picture to make your point.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot Jmf4119 for affirming the message of this poem. God bless.
Comment from kiwijenny
Yikes I don't want Botox ....clots....you'd have to be insane to try it...tox stands for poison...yikes ...i thought Elizabeth 1 was crazy for smearing her face with lead paint and vinegar to cover her small pox scars
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Yikes I don't want Botox ....clots....you'd have to be insane to try it...tox stands for poison...yikes ...i thought Elizabeth 1 was crazy for smearing her face with lead paint and vinegar to cover her small pox scars
God bless
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Yikes too kiwijenny, yes, tox stands for poison and I'd rather be natural with all the lines and wrinkles than be stretched and look like zombies devoid of muscle flexibility. God bless.
