Vain
Vanity is insane.....63 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Yes. We seem to not know when to stop. Botox is supposed to enhance, yet it often disfigures mentally and physically.
If wrinkles appear, then they probably were meant to be.When taking away something, it always must be replaced, and , yes in some places it may work, yet, I wonder mentally, if the balance is every addressed.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Yes. We seem to not know when to stop. Botox is supposed to enhance, yet it often disfigures mentally and physically.
If wrinkles appear, then they probably were meant to be.When taking away something, it always must be replaced, and , yes in some places it may work, yet, I wonder mentally, if the balance is every addressed.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot RGstar for enjoying the read and for the positive, five stars. God bless.
Comment from sibhus
All that just to look a few years younger, and in the long run it only ages people more. Interesting thoughts in such a few well thought words.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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All that just to look a few years younger, and in the long run it only ages people more. Interesting thoughts in such a few well thought words.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot sibhus for appreciating this work. Thanks too, for the five stars. God bless.
Comment from yarnteller
Extreme vanity can make people take regrettable measures on facial and body alterations. Great poem on the dangers of Botox as your picture fully illustrates. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Extreme vanity can make people take regrettable measures on facial and body alterations. Great poem on the dangers of Botox as your picture fully illustrates. Nicely done.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-May-2014
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Thanks yamteller for considering this poem nicely done, I am deeply honored.
Comment from michaelcahill
The shocking results of some of the cures should act as more of a deterrent, but they don't seem to. Considering how completely unnatural some people have turned out after surgery it is amazing how many chance it. Thank God we are so naturally gorgeous, Right? hahaha. Great piece. On the money. mikey
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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The shocking results of some of the cures should act as more of a deterrent, but they don't seem to. Considering how completely unnatural some people have turned out after surgery it is amazing how many chance it. Thank God we are so naturally gorgeous, Right? hahaha. Great piece. On the money. mikey
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks a lot my friend, I believe so, we are naturally gorgeous, ha,ha, too, LOL. God bless.
Comment from JonnyRhymes
This is a strong warning against botox with a powerful accompanying picture. I like your message and share your sentiment, and feel that you have delivered it in the best possible way; in a concise, factual poem which essentially is a health warning. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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This is a strong warning against botox with a powerful accompanying picture. I like your message and share your sentiment, and feel that you have delivered it in the best possible way; in a concise, factual poem which essentially is a health warning. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for considering this well done, I am honored. God bless.
Comment from Kingsland
That's good description of what vanity is in so few words. The picture fits the thoughts here really well. I think you hit the ole nail right on its proverbial head. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for this well written ultra short poetic format... John
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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That's good description of what vanity is in so few words. The picture fits the thoughts here really well. I think you hit the ole nail right on its proverbial head. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for this well written ultra short poetic format... John
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for considering this a well written ultra short poem. I am honored.
Comment from Njorgensen
Creative work here. Short poetry captures my imagination due to its need to be direct. When it's direct and creative, it's even more of a draw. You've accomplished that here. Good job.
Njorgensen
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Creative work here. Short poetry captures my imagination due to its need to be direct. When it's direct and creative, it's even more of a draw. You've accomplished that here. Good job.
Njorgensen
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for considering this creative and a good job. I am honored. God bless.
Comment from Cedar
Boy, you sure got this one right. That's all you hear about and see on TV. Plastic Surgeons are some of the richest people in the world. The picture that you used sort of looks like one of my old girl friends years ago (ha). Bill
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Boy, you sure got this one right. That's all you hear about and see on TV. Plastic Surgeons are some of the richest people in the world. The picture that you used sort of looks like one of my old girl friends years ago (ha). Bill
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks Bill for resonating with the message of the poem. I am honored that you enjoyed the read.
Comment from adewpearl
Powerful choice of illustration
strong rhymes
good alliteration in dimpled dots
strong social commentary - I will never understand why people place their health at risk to avoid a wrinkle - do they actually believe it's that important to hide the fact that each year they get older just like everyone else does? Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Powerful choice of illustration
strong rhymes
good alliteration in dimpled dots
strong social commentary - I will never understand why people place their health at risk to avoid a wrinkle - do they actually believe it's that important to hide the fact that each year they get older just like everyone else does? Brooke
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks Brooke for the insightful five star review. Thanks for appreciating this poem. God bless.
Comment from c_lucas
There are many horror stories related to cosmetic surgery. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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There are many horror stories related to cosmetic surgery. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2014
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Thanks for enjoying the poem. I am honored. God bless.
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You're welcome.
