The Bard of Bel Air
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Comment from seaglass
This looks like the beginning of a great tale. An adventure into the life and death of the rich and famous is always a pull to celebrity-crazed Americans. And if its a good detective story entwined...all the better. TAKE IT AWAY...MIKEY
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This looks like the beginning of a great tale. An adventure into the life and death of the rich and famous is always a pull to celebrity-crazed Americans. And if its a good detective story entwined...all the better. TAKE IT AWAY...MIKEY
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from djsaxon
Hey mikey. Really innovative but I so hate the font and the colour LOL. Ignoring the purple, the shape is great. You truly have a voice. DJ
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Hey mikey. Really innovative but I so hate the font and the colour LOL. Ignoring the purple, the shape is great. You truly have a voice. DJ
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
