NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "First Date Interrogation"30 Days of Poetry
7 total reviews
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
Perhaps this is a true to life first date conversation but it does not seem to have a point. And it is not interesting to me. Please rewrite and develop one or some of the topics you allude to. I will give it 5 stars because does seem to meet the writing prompt of twenty questions with a poem being required.
Preston
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
Perhaps this is a true to life first date conversation but it does not seem to have a point. And it is not interesting to me. Please rewrite and develop one or some of the topics you allude to. I will give it 5 stars because does seem to meet the writing prompt of twenty questions with a poem being required.
Preston
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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It has 20 questions... dating for company, love, marriage, procreation. thank you :)
Comment from Starlit Ink
I remember those days of first dates, and the endless questions and testing back and forth. You can always stand the guy up and avoid all of the questions, but then there would be that question in your head: "Was he the one?" This is a cute write that brings back memories.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I remember those days of first dates, and the endless questions and testing back and forth. You can always stand the guy up and avoid all of the questions, but then there would be that question in your head: "Was he the one?" This is a cute write that brings back memories.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Have a great week :)
Comment from Joan E.
I liked the topic you selected for your twenty questions and the cute accompanying picture of "Lady and the Tramp". Your conversation seems realistic and comical. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I liked the topic you selected for your twenty questions and the cute accompanying picture of "Lady and the Tramp". Your conversation seems realistic and comical. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Have a nice week :)
Comment from Joy Graham
I like this one, sunni :) Reminds me of my younger days lol! Some of the questions are a bit forward and I wouldn't have been bold enough to ask. You definitely took me into the world of a first date and young love. The picture is excellent to set the scene.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I like this one, sunni :) Reminds me of my younger days lol! Some of the questions are a bit forward and I wouldn't have been bold enough to ask. You definitely took me into the world of a first date and young love. The picture is excellent to set the scene.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I'm still on the dating thing. Placed myself on 2 sites... just waiting to be a great catch. Thank you. Have a great week :)
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...loved this! Isn't that a nut? and ...Does your cat vomit fur balls? Excellent humor...makes me glad I'm not dating, ha ha! Blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Ha ha...loved this! Isn't that a nut? and ...Does your cat vomit fur balls? Excellent humor...makes me glad I'm not dating, ha ha! Blessings tonight!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Have a nice week :)
Comment from royowen
A good idea and different I've played 20 questions, but mainly when I was young. This was a really inventive way of working a narrative, well done, Alicia, bless you Roy.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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A good idea and different I've played 20 questions, but mainly when I was young. This was a really inventive way of working a narrative, well done, Alicia, bless you Roy.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I'm in the dating pool.... Thank you. Peace be with you :)
Comment from mbagby23
Love the questions, also how you make a commit then ask another more important question. This date seems to be interesting. I think they should see each other again.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Love the questions, also how you make a commit then ask another more important question. This date seems to be interesting. I think they should see each other again.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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One date leads to another... if the couple has chemistry. Thank you :)
