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Haiku 5-7-5

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Comment from mbagby23
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Words do tend to burn like fire and most of the time the people saying the words don't even know how bad they hurt that person until it's to late. And some don't even care, which makes it worse.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

Comment from akulkumol
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Nice poem to describe use of words in a poem. Writing a poem to everyone's liking is a very difficult task. After burning heating in a blacksmith's evil the sentences needs to be shaped. Loved reading your poem and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014