Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

It has been said with doubt and dread
That judgement is a fever
With righteous rant we know we can't
avoid the great deceiver.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thank you so much. It sure tempts me. :) Blessings. Barbara

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Life normally has a way of putting things in the proper perspective.
Nicely composed, smooth flow to your words and tightly writte.
John

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thank you John. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, barbara, you did an excellent job writing this tercet poem about the way things will be set straight eventually. i enjoyed reading this one...

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thank you again my friend. Happy you liked it. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

the old saying grandpa used to have was there is no fool like an old fool and if you act like one you will reap what you sow and usually get it back two fold.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014

Thank you. So true. Blessings. Barbara

reply by country ranch writer on 14-Apr-2014

s m i l e

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I like how short this is....succinct...and so what comes around ...comes around....judgement was a clown
Paraded
Righteousness around.........
Well done
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you Jenny for the great review. Blessings. Barbara

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Life has a very bad habits of putting people into the correct place. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014

Thank you so much c_lucas. Blessings. Barbara

reply by c_lucas on 14-Apr-2014

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie