Closer To God
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Comment from Alan K Pease
If a woman wrote to me these word of praise so eloquently as you have done, I would be lost in the light of her smile - even the passion evolved from the picture is torment to our souls.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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If a woman wrote to me these word of praise so eloquently as you have done, I would be lost in the light of her smile - even the passion evolved from the picture is torment to our souls.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Alan for a beautiful review. Sigh.
Comment from Treischel
Wow! What an eloquent, unfettered expression of love and loving that explodes and pulsates on the page with orgasmic energy. The words are a fantastic tribute to you beloved.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Wow! What an eloquent, unfettered expression of love and loving that explodes and pulsates on the page with orgasmic energy. The words are a fantastic tribute to you beloved.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Sigh thank you so much Tom for an unbelievable review of this one.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, pam, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the love that makes you soar without falling and cry from the happiness of knowing such love
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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this is very well written, pam, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the love that makes you soar without falling and cry from the happiness of knowing such love
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you so much Pam for a wonderful review.
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
An excellent write about a great love. The words you have chosen carry the spirit. My God is spirit. I enjoyed the read and the spirit of love of which you have written. Thanks for sharing, Bob
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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An excellent write about a great love. The words you have chosen carry the spirit. My God is spirit. I enjoyed the read and the spirit of love of which you have written. Thanks for sharing, Bob
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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So many thanks Bob for a beautiful review.
Comment from Mark Schardine
Remember that the Old Testament contains the Song of Songs, and that members of the clergy speak of Holy Matrimony. God wants people to be happy and live good lives. Much is expected but many rewards are given.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Remember that the Old Testament contains the Song of Songs, and that members of the clergy speak of Holy Matrimony. God wants people to be happy and live good lives. Much is expected but many rewards are given.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Mark for a great review.
Comment from Sasha
You describe the beauty of passion so marvelously in this one. I just love the building to the superb crescendo of the final verse. You are a genius when it comes to love, and I envy you this gift. Superb work with this one, I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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You describe the beauty of passion so marvelously in this one. I just love the building to the superb crescendo of the final verse. You are a genius when it comes to love, and I envy you this gift. Superb work with this one, I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thank you ever so much Smurph for a fantastic review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Pam - Initially I was expecting a spiritual type of poem with your title. Your romantic twist was well penned and shares your unique blanket of love for your one. Nicely penned and expressive emotions pulling altogether like purse strings holding treasures.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Dear Pam - Initially I was expecting a spiritual type of poem with your title. Your romantic twist was well penned and shares your unique blanket of love for your one. Nicely penned and expressive emotions pulling altogether like purse strings holding treasures.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sigh thank you Maureen for a wonderful review of this one.
Comment from Bobby Jo
This is passion to the ultimate fullest. I felt the love and sensation of pure bliss. You described it wonderfully. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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This is passion to the ultimate fullest. I felt the love and sensation of pure bliss. You described it wonderfully. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Thanks so much Bobby for a great review.
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Oh they take you to heaven with the way they make you feel, create a paradise for two when only you have the keys to open the door. There you have it as you soar through the skies of eden in a blaze of glory, like shooting star angels you set the night sky ablaze with passion, sensation and elation! Build your own stairwell to heaven and ascend at any pace you will... as the door will always be open for the likes your twin souls :)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Oh they take you to heaven with the way they make you feel, create a paradise for two when only you have the keys to open the door. There you have it as you soar through the skies of eden in a blaze of glory, like shooting star angels you set the night sky ablaze with passion, sensation and elation! Build your own stairwell to heaven and ascend at any pace you will... as the door will always be open for the likes your twin souls :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sigh so great Dale. Thank you so much for this awesome review.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You bring me closer to God.
It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
A thousand times over
I'll never regret
knowing or being
reminded of
you!
a mix of romance and spiritual that work well, Pam.
rather lovely.
Margaret
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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You bring me closer to God.
It doesn't matter if it's wrong or right.
The trip is, oh, so worth it.
A thousand times over
I'll never regret
knowing or being
reminded of
you!
a mix of romance and spiritual that work well, Pam.
rather lovely.
Margaret
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sigh thank you so much Margaret for a beautiful review.
