Tally Ho!
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Comment from country ranch writer
man don't realize what he has at home till there is no home to come back to because he let his we-wanger lead him astray deserves his butt right
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man don't realize what he has at home till there is no home to come back to because he let his we-wanger lead him astray deserves his butt right
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
Hahaha. It is incredible that he thinks she has aged and he has not. Oops, big mistake to leave the one who cares about him. Now what if in the meantime she found she liked life without him?
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Hahaha. It is incredible that he thinks she has aged and he has not. Oops, big mistake to leave the one who cares about him. Now what if in the meantime she found she liked life without him?
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from Sankey
Sounds like my Dad. I know Mum was not perfect but he realised she was the best one for him 20 something years after he left us. Good work. Thought it was gonna be about your second wife ha! The one who wanted to run your band?? Lesbo? Love the artwork mate. Don't forget new Chapter 17 in my autobiography and reorganized Chapter 18 if you have not been there yet. One more chapter to add then finished I think.
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Sounds like my Dad. I know Mum was not perfect but he realised she was the best one for him 20 something years after he left us. Good work. Thought it was gonna be about your second wife ha! The one who wanted to run your band?? Lesbo? Love the artwork mate. Don't forget new Chapter 17 in my autobiography and reorganized Chapter 18 if you have not been there yet. One more chapter to add then finished I think.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from SLHarper
What a gorgeous, tragic, laughable story of a mid-life crisis!!! Lol! So many delusions, so little time! This is a serious, typical, emotionally-charged, pervasive example of wide-spread dysfunction in society... and you tell it like it is, WHILE making it funny! The tensions between the tone and the message in this poem are wonderful! Great job, Mikey C! I hope you don't write from personal experience! Love, Stephie
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What a gorgeous, tragic, laughable story of a mid-life crisis!!! Lol! So many delusions, so little time! This is a serious, typical, emotionally-charged, pervasive example of wide-spread dysfunction in society... and you tell it like it is, WHILE making it funny! The tensions between the tone and the message in this poem are wonderful! Great job, Mikey C! I hope you don't write from personal experience! Love, Stephie
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from seaglass
Your are so right, What are they thinking? Then again, the ones with money get away with it because (sadly to say) there are those young gold diggers who hone in on old wealthy men, like making an investment.
Put up with the toothless, impotent old dude for a few years, until the old fossil trips into his grave and she can collect all that wealth that should go to his children.
Life has greedy people. This satire, allows the reader to see the sad truth and chuckle.
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Your are so right, What are they thinking? Then again, the ones with money get away with it because (sadly to say) there are those young gold diggers who hone in on old wealthy men, like making an investment.
Put up with the toothless, impotent old dude for a few years, until the old fossil trips into his grave and she can collect all that wealth that should go to his children.
Life has greedy people. This satire, allows the reader to see the sad truth and chuckle.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Very good Mikey! I have seen that happen many times. There's something that men see in the mirror that women do not see. I mean they don't seem to see their pot bellies or their wrinkles. Is it magic? Women on the other hand are seldom happy with their looks. I had a son in law that would look in the mirror and say " You good looking sucker, don't you ever die!" He was handsome but really? What is that? LOL Nancy
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Very good Mikey! I have seen that happen many times. There's something that men see in the mirror that women do not see. I mean they don't seem to see their pot bellies or their wrinkles. Is it magic? Women on the other hand are seldom happy with their looks. I had a son in law that would look in the mirror and say " You good looking sucker, don't you ever die!" He was handsome but really? What is that? LOL Nancy
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yup, you have it right! Men do leave wonderful women thinking they can do better. LOL, most fail! Love you stance on this, Mikey, funny and factual!!! xsx Sandra
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Yup, you have it right! Men do leave wonderful women thinking they can do better. LOL, most fail! Love you stance on this, Mikey, funny and factual!!! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from Hadria
Gave me a very good laugh, Mikey. Was it the Battle of Clontarf you were headed for? (I've just discovered that on the 1,000th anniversary of said battle, I will be 72 Years old!)
I love the drawing, and I like the quirky way of writing, but I'd love to know did she feed his hunger or did she brain him with the nearest skillet??the King Hungers, indeed!
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Gave me a very good laugh, Mikey. Was it the Battle of Clontarf you were headed for? (I've just discovered that on the 1,000th anniversary of said battle, I will be 72 Years old!)
I love the drawing, and I like the quirky way of writing, but I'd love to know did she feed his hunger or did she brain him with the nearest skillet??the King Hungers, indeed!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
Sounds a bit British. Still enjoyable. I laugh with you. Well done poet. Tally Ho, we shall be that we are old or gray. Shalom
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Sounds a bit British. Still enjoyable. I laugh with you. Well done poet. Tally Ho, we shall be that we are old or gray. Shalom
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from DALLAS01
And hopefully her response is arrivederci and bon voyage.
Love the art work and the layout of this little gem.
Thanks for sharing.
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And hopefully her response is arrivederci and bon voyage.
Love the art work and the layout of this little gem.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
