Tally Ho!
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
wow and wow again. this is quite a write as only you can do my friend and make it sound sane in your insanely way. that is a compliment btw
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wow and wow again. this is quite a write as only you can do my friend and make it sound sane in your insanely way. that is a compliment btw
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this is a great companion write to Terry's. It often true for those with narcissistic tendencies. Don't stats show that a greater percentage of these types are men? The form is original, creative and aptly depicts a universal quandary. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this is a great companion write to Terry's. It often true for those with narcissistic tendencies. Don't stats show that a greater percentage of these types are men? The form is original, creative and aptly depicts a universal quandary. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Great fun with this tongue in cheek piece. Always a treat when you write something engaging and fun for all audiences, but still manage to present your message clearly. Too clever and too deep sometimes leaves out the very people you wish to reach. Smart choice of style. NG
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Great fun with this tongue in cheek piece. Always a treat when you write something engaging and fun for all audiences, but still manage to present your message clearly. Too clever and too deep sometimes leaves out the very people you wish to reach. Smart choice of style. NG
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
Comment from Nosha17
We never know the value of what we have until we don't have it anymore. Love the cartoon like form of your poem. Wittily written with a strong message. Great illustration-a knight in shining armour! Faye
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We never know the value of what we have until we don't have it anymore. Love the cartoon like form of your poem. Wittily written with a strong message. Great illustration-a knight in shining armour! Faye
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
Comment from Tatarka2
I really appreciate the message, but this would get a 4 from me if it were by anyone else, so I guess I'll give you the same rating. I realize it's "recognized," so there must be something I don't get. I really didn't perceive the lyrical nature of this piece at all. For me, it doesn't flow, whether read aloud or silently. It has an interesting and important message, but it's not really cleverly stated (and you are usually so good at that).
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I really appreciate the message, but this would get a 4 from me if it were by anyone else, so I guess I'll give you the same rating. I realize it's "recognized," so there must be something I don't get. I really didn't perceive the lyrical nature of this piece at all. For me, it doesn't flow, whether read aloud or silently. It has an interesting and important message, but it's not really cleverly stated (and you are usually so good at that).
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
Comment from Liandra
Very funny and enjoyable. I hope she gave him the
'heave ho!'
The art work is perfect and completes the picture.
:) Liandta
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Very funny and enjoyable. I hope she gave him the
'heave ho!'
The art work is perfect and completes the picture.
:) Liandta
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Yeah, I've seen this quite a few times in my own family. It is so sad when a relationship of 20 or 25 years is abandoned. This is very well done.
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Yeah, I've seen this quite a few times in my own family. It is so sad when a relationship of 20 or 25 years is abandoned. This is very well done.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
Comment from l.raven
seems like that's the thing to do these days Michael...you don't know what you have lost until it is gone...second poem I had to use this on tonight..LOL...love your poem and the form...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
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seems like that's the thing to do these days Michael...you don't know what you have lost until it is gone...second poem I had to use this on tonight..LOL...love your poem and the form...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from Spitfire
Your notes mirrored exactly what I was thinking as I read the poem. "The grass always looks greener on the other side." Better to stay married to someone who remembers what you looked like when young. :-)
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Your notes mirrored exactly what I was thinking as I read the poem. "The grass always looks greener on the other side." Better to stay married to someone who remembers what you looked like when young. :-)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
Comment from ravenblack
The king hungers and the king is going to have to get used to t.v. dinners and sleeping on the couch. Mid-life/late-life crisis never ends well. Tally ho!
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The king hungers and the king is going to have to get used to t.v. dinners and sleeping on the couch. Mid-life/late-life crisis never ends well. Tally ho!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2014
