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Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Truth."
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Comment from amada
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This is very well done. I understand this is a remake, I don't remember the first one, I try to follow your posts whenever I can. I like the sense of calm while reading your work. Well done. Namaste.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 05-Jul-2013
    Namaste my friend , thank you. Pili
Comment from Darkhorse555
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in the picture looking like the sun dressed in its dark attire from the clouds you have clearer vision you pen really beautiful a lovely piece

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    What a review my friend, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from Gungalo
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Let my soul
arrive
to shores
of calmness,
be able
to develop
through
meditation
clarity
to distinguish
without doubt
all that is false
strength
to never
reject
truth.

A beautiful write Pili. What are you doing girl? This certificate is supposed to be used for writes that didn't get enough reviews. I'm sure this one did.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Read on top of opening page, it is to bring poems written long ago , most people now did not read the old ones , not to get more rewards. Unimportant. Love . Pili
reply by Gungalo on 03-Jul-2013
    I read it girlie, now you read it. LOL.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    LOL
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Thank you sweet... Pili
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Oh , they changed it. If you get one of your old poems and want new people to read it take it out and resend it, but the trick is you have to buy a certificate.... Hugs they will say in message that is old one. I have hundreds,,being here like 12 years. Most people never read them. You was able to edit and sent them always.
reply by Gungalo on 03-Jul-2013
    I see. Well ...
reply by Gungalo on 03-Jul-2013
    Smile Pili.
reply by Gungalo on 03-Jul-2013
    Smiling at you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    You seem not to agree with posting old poems, yet I would like to read many old poems from my favorite poets. They are their poems, I don't care when they wrote them at all.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Thank you my friend... Smile back
Comment from ravenblack
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Truth is always something to strive for no matter how glorious or painful. Clearing clouds to reach shores of calmness- the right approach expressed w/clarity and calmness. Whatever it is you seek, you will find it.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    You are so right, it is a life time search.... Thank you my friend , meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Exceptional
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The words flow so wonderfully. the descriptons are tear pulling. This brought tears and I am not sure why. It is beautiful in its clarity and truthfulness. Wow is all I can say

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    What a wonderful review Barb, thank you so very much my friend for the high rate. You humble me. Hugs . Pili
Comment from Lise Deangelo
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A wonderful poem that I enjoyed reading. Especially love,

Remove
all clouds
from my path
to awareness,

Exquisite artwork, colours, and presentation, Pili. Thanks so much for sharing, my friend. :) Lise

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    What a terrific review, thank you Lise. Pili
Comment from reconciled
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Hi Pili....-smile-...how are sweet lady...?...Well, its a beautiful write....and yes rejecting truth....accepting truth sometimes means....lose....power...prestiege....money....so, truth is buried....but thing is...you dig deep enough...you just can't.....alright...you rock smell good....love you Michael

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Truth liberates you and guides you . But is a life time search. Thank you Michael.
    Love. Pili
reply by reconciled on 03-Jul-2013
    yes....there is safety in truth...a sturdy rudder in trusted old friend.
Comment from donaldww
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The poet is addressing a higher power and the reader listens. The poet asks that impediments be removed from her path to allow the purest truth shine with clarity.

Because if she can recognize truth, it will never be rejected.

A kind of prayer in free verse.

Cheers,
DW


 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Never thought of it as prayer but you are right. Thank you Donald for a terrific review. Pili
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Let truth be the only search of the soul, let all doubts be removed from the heart and new stand of truth revealed afresh with renewed vigour, inspirationally stated. Typo: strenghth [strength] 26/702

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Tank you so very much for an excellent review and correcting my typo, Pili
Comment from l.raven
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OH Pili, What a calm peaceful read this is. I love the wording. And the picture just perfect. So very well written. Love it Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2013

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2013
    Thank you so very much Linda , wonderful review. Pili