NaPoWriMo 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Wine & Love"30 Days of Poetry
9 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Sounds like a night for the lets drink the wine and play the game of touchy feely and see where the night takes you all look out headache come the morrow
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Sounds like a night for the lets drink the wine and play the game of touchy feely and see where the night takes you all look out headache come the morrow
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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I don't mind having those nights... except I need a guy. It's not so fun alone. Thank you
Have a great week :)
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you will find one have no fear when it does you will be surprised for he was there under your nose but you just didn't see him for what a kind person he is
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you will find one have no fear when it does you will be surprised for he was there under your nose but you just didn't see him for what a kind person he is
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You're nice. Thanks again.
Enjoy the week :)
Comment from Starlit Ink
Your poem is light-hearted, with a whimsical ending. Drinking sparkling wine and flopping on the couch-what could be better? Wine and love is a classic pairing that works with this elegant but sweet poem.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Your poem is light-hearted, with a whimsical ending. Drinking sparkling wine and flopping on the couch-what could be better? Wine and love is a classic pairing that works with this elegant but sweet poem.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a nice weekend :)
Comment from Glasstruth
ALCOHOL, seems to release our inner emotions we hide. Don't believe alcohol is the culprit, but the excuse in that who we want to be. There's an innocence to this, as there is to our being. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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ALCOHOL, seems to release our inner emotions we hide. Don't believe alcohol is the culprit, but the excuse in that who we want to be. There's an innocence to this, as there is to our being. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Have a good weekend :)
Comment from rjuselius
haha.lol. a pretty picture you paint, even if it is quite amusing:) but i guess you intendid so. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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haha.lol. a pretty picture you paint, even if it is quite amusing:) but i guess you intendid so. nice one.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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Thank you. Have a nice weekend :)
Comment from Irish Rain
I just love this! I would definitely give this a six if I could! Love the underpants line! I like Sweet Red myself! Blessings to you tonight!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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I just love this! I would definitely give this a six if I could! Love the underpants line! I like Sweet Red myself! Blessings to you tonight!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2014
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You're very kind. Thank you.
Have a great weekend :)
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Preston McWhorter
Hi, Sunni,
"Wine and Love" is an excellent rhyming couplet structured poem with good rhyme except that the last couplet is a slant rhyme. I believe wine is a typical Greek inspired subject. Bacchus and all that. Good luck in the contest.
Preston
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Hi, Sunni,
"Wine and Love" is an excellent rhyming couplet structured poem with good rhyme except that the last couplet is a slant rhyme. I believe wine is a typical Greek inspired subject. Bacchus and all that. Good luck in the contest.
Preston
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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I saw the 'My Big Fat Greek Wedding' movie.... they only did windex and clear shots of something or another. Thank you
Have a nice weekend :)
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Probably Uzo. I was thinking ancient Greeks
Comment from royowen
A beautifully worded poem, sounds like the years back in the acid/weed era of 1960/70s when those wonderful days slipped by effortlessly! Well done, Alicia, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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A beautifully worded poem, sounds like the years back in the acid/weed era of 1960/70s when those wonderful days slipped by effortlessly! Well done, Alicia, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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I am not pro drugs; legalized or otherwise.
Thank you :)
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Never thought you were, Alicia, you're too smart! Great talking with you! Love and hugs, Roy.
Comment from NicciFaye
I love the title alone. Great poem. Great emotions felt from the poem. Wine and love..now that is a sparkling combination! Excellent poem sunnilicious!
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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I love the title alone. Great poem. Great emotions felt from the poem. Wine and love..now that is a sparkling combination! Excellent poem sunnilicious!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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Thank you
Have a nice weekend :)
Comment from daniela.albu
You express the joy of life in your poem and loves sometimes go well with wine and poetry, as the poet Omar Khayam used to say. You have a way of your own with words and this is what makes the style of a writer.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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You express the joy of life in your poem and loves sometimes go well with wine and poetry, as the poet Omar Khayam used to say. You have a way of your own with words and this is what makes the style of a writer.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2014
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You're very kind. Thank you.
Have a good weekend :)
