Worlds End
A very small and quick glimpse into an Apocalyptic scenario.2 total reviews
Comment from manicblue
So sad to think of the end of times. I wrote a story called "the end". we may be fooling ourselves but I hope things won't get that bad. Above all else, a spiritual revolution would be best.
A haiku title is:
haiku (world's end) -- 's in world's
and no use of capital letters and minimal punctuation and no metaphors. Haiku is so strict and I hope you get some reviews that can explain them better than my attempt.
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So sad to think of the end of times. I wrote a story called "the end". we may be fooling ourselves but I hope things won't get that bad. Above all else, a spiritual revolution would be best.
A haiku title is:
haiku (world's end) -- 's in world's
and no use of capital letters and minimal punctuation and no metaphors. Haiku is so strict and I hope you get some reviews that can explain them better than my attempt.
mb xx
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Earth Sleeps, Heaven Weeps
Dark Days, Blind Nights, Decayed Life
God's Love, peace, joy,ease
Good insight of the end of the world.
Fantastic presentation
Perfect syllable count for this prompt 5-7-5
Best of luck in the contest
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Earth Sleeps, Heaven Weeps
Dark Days, Blind Nights, Decayed Life
God's Love, peace, joy,ease
Good insight of the end of the world.
Fantastic presentation
Perfect syllable count for this prompt 5-7-5
Best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
